Just wondering

[samar]

I walked under the dark night sky
wondering,if we will ever be together
I thought"how strange?!"
we promised each other"our love will last forever"
but there is something makes me wonder
will we ever be together?!
or is it written for us to suffer
this endless love
There is a power above us
which can make us
live together happily ever after...or
seperate us by something stronger than us..
Death ..
Which is His wisdom that no one can ever change..

just a try :D

[criminal]

cool,that was really nice.I can say to you dead ahead.But you're missing one thing that you followed the arabic style and that doesn't suit english pomes.Actuall I don't if you've writen this pome your self.

[criminal]

there were some mistakes i didn't notice.

[samar]

thanks brother for replying
yes,i wrote it by myself...and it is my first try....i think i need more practice in english poems as you said
thanks alot brother.:)

[aboali]

walha nice words i like it .thanks samar for this good words

[samar]

thank you for your reply and encouragement :)