SOME OF MY BEST POEMS

[SoMe1]

Here are some of the best poems i love and write as Kamakazy asked me to join in and particepate i thought it might be something Cool to do..

"There's a feeling that has captured me, not a moment that I'm free.....
I have wondered how it happened, when I had my chance to flee.
Can't believe that I'm so taken by someone I've yet to touch,
All I know is that I'm shakened, by the love I feel so much.
If the world could only be told how I feel so deep inside,
Oh...If I could be so bold I would listen to my heart, my guide.
The words that rush from my lips when-ever I am in her presence,
Are not made up or mere slips, they are the expression of my essence.
I think about this new love every moment I'm awake.
Is this real, I ask as I look above, Or could it be that this is fake.
The answer that I always get is one that leaves me dreaming,
of a special time unarrived as yet, where she will see me beaming."



[Edited by some1 on 12-23-2000 at 04:55 AM]

[SoMe1]

FADE TO BLACK

Broken dreams fall apart and shattered tears break my heart..
And thoughts run wild and pain breaks free and leaves descend from limbs of trees.
And darkness creep sand night time wails.. And courage drowns as fear prevails..
And desperation takes it's graspand hope and joy are in the past.
And smiles crumbleand blue eyes lied.. An icy chill answers whyan ache in the dark
And warmpth won't come back and love is over, fade to black.

Broken 22Promise
Here we are where we stand heart to heart, hand in hand
Silent watching in the night.. The stars the moon pale, golden light
We are two but joined as one Promises made in the summers sun
I'll love you, you'll love me.. Never to part, together we'll be...
The smell of salt is in the air the sound of pain heard every where
Memories fade quickly it seems To take from me my beloved dreams
My tear drops fall salty hate.. My heart lies dying, my life can wait
Promises we made... words were spoken
Love once lived here but now the promises are broken.

[Edited by some1 on 12-23-2000 at 04:58 AM]

[SoMe1]

TEARS IN THE NIGHT

Tears in the nightfall like rain To scald my burning face.
And memories dance slowlyin the shadows of the dark
And aggrivate the ache in my heart. Love, anger, hate, pain,emotions run wild.
And anguish is a feeling known. And pictures of you danceupon my closed eyes
And your smile retunsto haunt me And tears in the night fall like rain
Upon the windows of my heart.

[Thug4Life]

well done some1 where was all those hidden feelings of urs!
we hope that u will continue sending such extra feelings peoms.... :D

[Kamakazy]

those were some touching words! nice going Some1, 2 thumbs up for yah!

but i was hopeing to hear ur own words! ur own feeling!

care to share some with us?

[SoMe1]

those are poems i wrote duuh and if they went mine ill just let you know at the end of each poem but since i said nothing then they are mine got it.. i wrote them. they are miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine.. mali ana wa7di..
lolz
thanks again guys..
more coming up soon wait for'em
kam you have to have 2 fingers on both hands not only one

[Thug4Life]

how do those words come out of any 1s heart!? is it the experiance that make it out...is it a gift from allah...is it mostly feelings...
I used to write some english poems...But maan i stoped before 4years..(Life!)
I love to taste Peoms...I like to feel it and digest it and feel the hounisty and truth in them.

[Nikita]

some1..well done...nice stuff you have there..where were you all this time,eah!?

guys i love poems..but i cant write one unless im soo hurt and down or when im so happy .. up on the moon..and for the time being...im nether here nor there..so...we'll wait and see..ok..:)

yo,thug4life...come on ..go ahead and show us your stuff :D

[SoMe1]

So very kind..

Thanks for your letter you explained all the reasons why you stopped loving me..
How thoughtful you were how so very kind, to take all of that time..
I've read it backwards and forwards and even between the lines..
Your rejection still strings even though, you were so very kind..
Perhaps I'm just to sensitive maybe I'm out of line after all, you did write a letter, you were just so very kind…





I Though Of You Just Once Today

I thought of you just once today, you're face once crossed my mind..
I though just once of your beautiful Face.
And yes just once a thought slipped in, that was naughty but not wrong.
I thought of you just once today…
It lasted all day long..

[SoMe1]

You And Me

You and me..
We use to be together..
Everyday together always
I really feel I'm losing my best friend..
I can't believe this could be the end..

It looks as though you're letting go and if it's real
Well I don't want to know..

Don't speak
I know just what you're saying
So please stop explaining
Don't tell me "Because it hurts"
Don't speak
I know what you're thinking
I don't need your reasons don't tell me "because it hurts"

Our memories they can be inviting
But some are altogether mighty frightening

As we die, both you and I
With my head in my hands
I sit and cry

It's all ending
I got to stop pretending who we are..
You and me
I can see us dying .. are we ??


WHAT DO U THINK GUYS?? AM I GREAT OR WHAT?? il made7 nafso kathab i better shut it out!! but serously what do you think??

[salim]

woooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!



Great!

i just read some parts; cause i will go back after Iftar.


but to give a little impression'


"They remind me those days.....when we were
on such an ocean which never ends"


Abdul halim hafidh was very right:-


that if he knew :-

the ocean(oflove)was so deepwould have never tried to....




Come one .....Nikita say something.....

or u wait for somebody to make u angry;
wel Kalamzoo where are uuuuuu

[Edited by salim on 12-23-2000 at 06:36 AM]

[Nikita]

looooooool...something like that...

[salim]

Kamakazy !!!!


Please help....

tel me the tactics u used to make somebody Angry,
i mean real furious


it is not a joke cause u are expert,


Plse.Note


When fighting begins, you be infront i will take cover
cause u know;

'I shall be still learning"

[Nikita]

why do you wanna make someone angry....and then..don't you think that Kamakazy is such an angel ;)

[salim]

so that body


while ... gets angry

... will send us lovely poems of sorrow./or anger
m,ay be

and another party will......



Mr kamakazy


I said; wil u pleeeeeeeeeeeese

[SoMe1]

mabrrok salim 100 posts.. keep i up..
and dont make me angry you wont like me :)

[Kamakazy]

Salim trust me u would want to know how to fight! u better make more friends than enemies!

there is no good way to hurt someone, there is no good way to make someone angre, the only good thing about having enemies is becoming friends in the end!

[salim]

Very wel !!!


Please accept me T h o u sands Apologies


i me no want fight


but:- Salim = Surrendered.

[salim]

some1



tks,

but i think Mr moder, meter is u/s
how come to log that much with a blink
of an eye.



'Please; do not become angry,u know
i am very old man, all fighting tactics
have buried em; but believe me in talking
no parableeem; but fighting; No Way,'


Kamakazy;
u hear that

i am good boooooy !!!

'I want to be friendly( ghost casper)
ooops Sorry Friendly with everyone.


Pleeeeyyyyyyyyyyyse!!!!!