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http://tripletee.deviantart.com/art/Sadness-and-Sorrow-72777648

hmm... I said I would color it...right?...
well this is the outcome...

http://tripletee.deviantart.com/art/Sadness-and-Sorrow-colored-75636015

no it didn't take me all this time :XD:... all in all probably a whole day's work.... for the rest I delayed cuz wasn't in the mood :mmhmm:

oh well...now it's finally done.
hope you like it :)

the logo....the logo "cries"

that bad? :XD:

hay des. :yes:

it's just a temporary logo...i'm working on another one.. :XD:
ignore it and concentrate on the rest :p lol

you should NOT add your digital typography (the logo and the text at the bottom) because frankly it ruins the rest of the drawing. You might argue that one should focus on the drawing and coloring (i'll get to that) but trust me..presentation and the environment around the drawing has a huge effect on how one judges the over all result.

Seeing that you're still quite new to digital airbrushing and painting I'm going to say that you've done a fairly decent job in coloring this sketch, especially the guy with the black/navy blue cloak at the back, but the two guys in front have weird proportions and the coloring could use more depth cause that dead guys leg looks rather flat to me.

Over all I think this is a pretty decent effort.

this drawing IS digital :XD:... in a traditional way :XD:...if that makes any sense. and down there is the copyright bla bla...

... every art has it and it looks normal with them.. why is it so abnormal with me :(...

I want my works to have copyrights and logos :XD:.....

this is fairly decent?..I'll kill you :XD:....

I know it's a digital drawing, mine are too and I add typography, but I take time to choose fonts that actually compliment my drawings and blend with them in terms of colors and over all style, I don't just slap on a font I like with any drawing. Regarding the logo, well I'm afraid you'll have to come up with something new and attractive looking..cause ahem..well phat said it all. :P lol

you bunch of losers....lol
go away...

anyone... help and say something improved at least :inno: :XD:

you bunch of losers....lol
go away...

anyone... help and say something improved at least :inno: :XD:

You did:yes:
















NOT!!!!

:hyper:

Not bad

The legs of the dead guy are too long innit?

Overall it's good.

But, what's up with that logo?:think:

well thanks for the tips... will keep that in mind. as for now. i'm not bothered about the presentation yet...my concern's the coloring. If one considers this way of coloring has a better outcome than my traditional way... that's my current goal...

hopefully will get there and move to presentation next time

What is your traditional way?

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/TripleTee9/hole1.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/TripleTee9/sc.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/TripleTee9/Give_Me_A_Chance_by_TripleTee.jpg

I guess quality differs... here's the normal image... so people can focus on it.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y261/TripleTee9/sadness-and-sorrowcoloreddone.jpg

i really like the way you colored the dude at the back.
but whats wrong with the dead guy's other foot?

over all, nicely colored Tee. :cute:

wallah every time i look at the guy holding the dead man, i can almost hear 'Sadness and Sorrow' .. :(

Mashallah! I like them colored more than before.:love:
Absolutely love what you do. God bless.

the guy's other foot...is on the other side :XD:...ummm more distant... I was supposed to make it more blurry... but oh well... thought it looked ok the way it was.

thanks nella :cute:


and aww... thanks loads WD.. :)

wowie tee, i am sooo loving them..it's wonderful..it's fantastic...
regardless of the "lovely" :bored: comments you've received *mumbles* "fairly decent job" awain..pff.. anyway, regardless of that, i think it's great. i love the use of colors..the colors and kind of colors make a big difference in the drawing. i love the.."if only you gave me a chance" one;) i know how you feel tee.i know how you feel :rolleyes:

more over, i have to say that it really makes me motivated and want to draw as good as you. I just aint in the mood sometimes tee! yelp me! :shy:
it is P.E.R.F.E.C.T.O! :D

I think you should have loosened up the leg a bit.
Loved the way you colored the ground.
overall, I like it, it's more alive now.

nice job 3T :)

now that is motivating AE... looadza thanxx..

Evana... very true... was not easy positioning them... but so far... i'll improve that with my next drawings... thanks :D

ok

the new style of coloring is damn ****ing good!!! Keep it up

Won't say much about the logo as I think you've received your share of unfavorable comments in that department :p

But it seems like coloring is what you want to be reviewed here and I'm no expert but all I can say is you've certainly improved alot!! :)

I don't know if it's a whole new technique you've adopted or whether you've become much better in the old one but the new one is really good compared to your previous work! :)

Keep it up Tee! :star:

thanks spirit :D

AP: I've been missing your inputs... welcome back :D
and yesss... that's the part I wanted comments on... as long's you say it improved then I'm on the safe side :hyper: thank you

wow amazing job TT, the colouring really improved the drawing ;)

and like all the others, the best part was the guy in the back ;)

so you allll like the murderer.... I'm watching out for sabla people ...

but thanks :D

^ we all have at least one enemy/person we dislike;)