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ti3gib
18-01-08, 10:47 PM
No editing in focus ranging, softening or sharpening.
Strictly color and contrast enhancement.

Critique please. I see a couple of flaws already, I wonder if anyone would.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/ti3gib/P1050737HalfLomo.jpg

ti3gib
18-01-08, 10:49 PM
You can guess what is is too btw. (Even though that ruins that Abstract aspect, I dont care really :D)

Superbia
18-01-08, 10:49 PM
What is this? :os

amo_l_oman
18-01-08, 10:51 PM
You can guess what is is too btw.

Help us a little bit ?

ti3gib
18-01-08, 10:53 PM
ABSTRACT ABSTRACT ABSTRACT !

(Mimicking Steve Ballmer's Developers Developers Developers thing)

NaBHaN
18-01-08, 10:55 PM
Apart from being grainy and too bright on the bottom left corner (almost making it look filtered) I see nothing wrong with it and I like the almost glittery feel of it especially at the top.

amo_l_oman
18-01-08, 10:58 PM
(Mimicking Steve Ballmer's Developers Developers Developers thing)

Hmmm understood
Ok next time chose something real
Thx

ti3gib
18-01-08, 10:59 PM
The grain is supposed to support the lighting technique. It doesn't have a real name but I call it, Lomo edge bleeding, because that's what happens, you burn the edges by over contrasting a lomograph.

Footy_Gal
18-01-08, 11:16 PM
tsk tsk

presentation, and being the lady i am, i'll help you out.. you should have a preview size because the size you provided doesn't fit on the screen

shame i can't give an indifferent opinion, because i love you so much

ti3gib
19-01-08, 01:29 AM
I'm a beginner, it's me who should want people seeing my work, and not wanting people to spend the effort of clicking on a preview to view my work, which may or may not be good at all.

But it's a good thing the love is mutual. That's always a good thing.

Cute_Ting
19-01-08, 02:11 AM
it looks like jeans like u know those type of jeans with two colors and it has a soft side and a rough side like the green looks like the soft lines

ti3gib
19-01-08, 02:16 AM
LooL.

No, but nice try.

Cute_Ting
19-01-08, 02:17 AM
L0o0oL (A) Uumm okay i'll try one more time its a leaf

ti3gib
19-01-08, 02:31 AM
Noooope .. :D

This shouldn't be a guessing game.

Cute_Ting
19-01-08, 02:32 AM
hahahaaaaaaay well i think if u tell us ur going to see and read a lot of ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i c lol

Pen_it_Black
19-01-08, 04:47 AM
I like the color of the piece and how it goes from focused to blurry

My head hurts from trying to figure out it is...Is it one of those long bead things you hang in doorways? Or perhaps carpet on the wall of lifts (the do it here and it sorta looks like that!)

Muggle
19-01-08, 04:48 AM
I love how it glows at the top.
Is it a gate?

cLueLess
19-01-08, 04:54 AM
You can guess what is is too btw. (Even though that ruins that Abstract aspect, I dont care really :D)
I don't know what it is but it's giving me a headache!

Amjad
19-01-08, 04:59 AM
That is your apartment's carpet ..

ti3gib
19-01-08, 03:56 PM
Good guesses. The wait's over.

It's a water fountain from Festival City in Dubai. Always when there's a glow like the one of the far right corner, it's always water.

Thanks for the comments.

pixie girl
19-01-08, 05:00 PM
Ooooh ook :D
I like the glittery effect but it should've been less bright around the bottom corner.

Oblivious
19-01-08, 06:09 PM
.....*sigh*

CompulsiveWaves
19-01-08, 09:16 PM
Did you make it Negative?! because as far as i remember it dint have this colour! but its a good shot!

Cute_Ting
20-01-08, 09:20 AM
oooohhhhh i sseeeeee thats cool

J'adore
20-01-08, 02:36 PM
I CANT BELIEVE U GUYS COULDNT FIGURE IT OUT..

Wallah the moment I looked at it.. I was like.. Daamn I feel like im standing at the bottom of a watterfall and lookin at it as its commin down.. lool..

Amazing!!

Nella
22-01-08, 01:52 AM
i like this! i like the glittery thing up there,
the bottom left corner looks like water.

nice! =D

WoLF DoLL
22-01-08, 08:16 PM
Looking at it made my eyes hurt.

UmKhalid
08-02-08, 11:23 PM
It looks like a glittery top, where have you been shopping!

b7r
09-02-08, 12:40 AM
It looks like those curtains are made of glass or plastic and or wood and sometimes they come in pics when its the strings are still together you can see the pic...it looks nice tho ;)