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NaBHaN
15-01-08, 09:52 PM
http://nabhan.deviantart.com/art/Apologize-74679487

"it's too late to apologize.."

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Inspired by the OneRepublic song with the same title.

Done from scratch in Illustrator CS - 4 hours

Superbia
15-01-08, 10:11 PM
Perfect! This one is surely breath-taking! I love how you've demonstrated the concept behind it. Very creative I must say and the colors' brightness is so suitable too; not too bright or dark.

But I have to criticize something, I always praise you about it, but this time it isn't as impressive. The title could've been a lot catchier, something like: "It's too little too late." Nevertheless, great job! :cute:

Charm
15-01-08, 10:46 PM
I think its kinda cute, I like it! Well done Nabs :cute:

Storm
15-01-08, 11:04 PM
Such amazing work, colors, and theme ! I really like it.

Such hard message !

Arabian Prince
15-01-08, 11:49 PM
Heyyy.. this one's awesome. I like it very much. :)

I find it very meaningful. Usually I'd have to try hard to make out all the details and the message it carries. But this one's very simple yet expressive.


(I know, I should learn how to comment on artwork again :os)


Great job NaBHaN! :super:

Threadlike
16-01-08, 12:58 AM
It's nicely done Nabs but the burnt end of the paper looks a little bit unreal somehow. I mean, it stands out. The flame is nicely done and the background. The construction of the paper is done meticulously...

I like it. 8/10.

NaBHaN
16-01-08, 01:38 AM
Thanks so much all of you for your feedback. Yes I know that the flame and burnt bits are not perfect but it's really difficult to get a fire like look in vector format and also I did that without any references so it's a learning process and I'm still learning with every illustration I make because I purposely choose different objects because they have different textures and surfaces which results in a different look and a different method in illustrating it.

This was certainly not an easy piece but I guess I'm satisfied with what I was able to achieve.

Thanks once again..I always enjoy reading what the members have to say.

b7r
16-01-08, 01:44 AM
This looks amazing dude woow mashallah bs i think u shudve made the paper more 3d lookin ...but its really nice:D

i3u00n_ildenya
16-01-08, 02:44 AM
I really like this piece. The 1st thing that caught my eye is the string thats holding the match. ;p

Great Job.:cute:

Evana
16-01-08, 02:54 AM
Nice job Nabs :)

But I gotta comment on that string, ..I just don’t like it it cuts down along the middle of the background. Maybe if you rotate the letter a bit and burn out the other end of the paper instead (down on the right). Just a thought, but I liked the idea.

Thalia
16-01-08, 03:12 AM
Love the string and love the detail on the paper... the burning paper and flame need to be perfected.. but on the whole it looks great. :D

Nella
16-01-08, 03:56 AM
awesome! i really like the paper.
i agree on the flame thingie. but the colors are really cool, does look burnt.
and as usual, very creative! :super:

hey! can you really tie a match with a string like that? it can't really sit straight when it's hanging by a string right? ..or can it?

Cute_Ting
16-01-08, 05:56 AM
awwww i like that one and sometimes it is too late to opologize i like this one a lot

J'adore
16-01-08, 08:25 AM
This art work is just Sexy! it's full of creativity n I just lovz it! <33

Pen_it_Black
16-01-08, 08:33 AM
Nice work Nabs :cute: But I agree with Evana it would have been better off without the string in the middle holding the match. I love the curly colorful 'smoke' in the image...so beautiful!! Have you got a piece with the smoke on it's own only?

3 a b d o o s h
16-01-08, 08:48 AM
Really nice, but as some members pointed out that the match without the string would be better, but it's still nice, how you tied it. I like the textures of the burns and the flame.
I just learned how to play this song on the guitar the day before yesterday, ha-ha.

Rock Devil
16-01-08, 09:04 AM
Perfect.Amazing.Astonoshing.

NaBHaN
17-01-08, 04:48 AM
Thanks so much all of you. :cute:

AMARANT
17-01-08, 05:12 AM
great job nabz, one of ur best IMO...

but im confused, who's burning the paper? the mistaken one who is thinking: "too late, wont send it"

or the angry one:"too late, im not gonna forgive him/her"