Into the depth of my shallow heart
I see the things so clear and so short
Beyond my dreams the path is so far
My whole life depends on reaching its shore

My eyes was shined by light
And I held the torch of faith so tight
So I can defeat my fears and fight
Never thought that everything was so right
And that what I could've see in my sight
When my dreams are passing away by the door
Today I could be dead and might
But my heart guided me into that shore
Of dreams that sparkle in my eyes at night

If I was totally blessed in my life
Then why did my flowers was separated by knife?
You just must know that nothing stays clean
It's always covered by dust even when it cannot be seen
How strange that dreams are coming and passing away
But its' marks remains today

We just live our lives finding our dreams
And walk in its' road with the guiding of its ' beams
I'll just step backward and touch my fate
And close my eyes to open the gate







Hope ur liked it ,, guys!! cheers,, ramadhaaaaaaan kareeem..:):p

a new member and a poet... welcome kairi...and ramadhan kareem to you :)

hehe thx aloot pal,,,,,,, yay im a poet LOOL!!

V.nice attempt as well, Powerful entry...and a fading end...

Great.

YAY, thx alot dude.. this is one of my oldest poems, I used to sing it though..

Thats was REALLLY nice, i really liked it Keep em comin grl