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Miss_Crocodilo
20-06-07, 08:27 PM
Footprints of a Friend

Now I glance back,
And I take one last look
Tears of sadness and regret
Fall down on my cheeks

Deep down I'm hollow and twisted
Standing on my feet, alive but dead
Every day is a struggle,
And every breath is a fight for survival

I'm left alone in the past
Trapped inside my body
I want to cry,
And shout why?

Why did I have to leave?
Why did you have to go?
Is happiness a dream we can touch,
Or sometimes just can't see?

Comments are highly appreciated

e M o
24-06-07, 08:06 PM
ahh i wouldn't wish for anyone to go through this ..

Keep writing :)

TripleTee
24-06-07, 08:50 PM
not bad :)... keep them coming.

PsYco D
24-06-07, 10:02 PM
i love this one so much walla,bss the last stanza doesnt really suit the poem(my opinion only)bss over all,this is one of ur best writings:Dkeep it up guurrrrl

Charm
28-06-07, 02:05 PM
Aw, that's so nice girl I like it :flower:

Miss_Crocodilo
30-06-07, 11:20 AM
Thanks ya'll :D

Gunner
30-06-07, 02:05 PM
Nice poem.
Are you going through this.

Miss_Crocodilo
30-06-07, 03:05 PM
^ Sort of.

Thanks for the comment :cute:

Superbia
30-06-07, 03:14 PM
Perfectly said. Describes my exact feelings at this moment :O

Miss_Crocodilo
30-06-07, 04:00 PM
Thanks, truly appreciated :D.