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NiGhTFaCe
09-06-07, 08:48 PM
I can’t write…
I can’t imagine… it’s finishing me
I can’t open more doors... I can’t
I can’t… the walls are stopping me

The sky is over my head
I can touch it… though I am going high
It’s the opposite… it’s all losing
I can’t look above or any more I can fly

I can’t speak…
Its unrecognized language I understand
The words are upside down…
In what dictionary they stand or would stand

I can’t think of what I am thinking of
I can’t read what I have written before
I can’t remember what I have been telling
I can’t really tell if it’s me or me anymore.

Phat
09-06-07, 09:22 PM
about time you share something new nighty, decent work.

NiGhTFaCe
09-06-07, 11:35 PM
Yeah Phat, guess that goes back to January 2007. Thanks though :)

[sweetness]
10-06-07, 12:29 AM
I can't go anymore through it !
Better to stop and listen to myself, might help :)

Decent words ;)

Thank you for sharing :)

Threadlike
10-06-07, 02:21 PM
Nicely done...And sort of flowing. I like the repitition of 'I Can't' in the lines, streghthens the whole thing. Nicely done...Keep it up!

Storm
10-06-07, 02:36 PM
Just amazing NF ... I like it alot !

Thanks for sharing it.

TripleTee
10-06-07, 02:43 PM
not bad at all NF... well expressed. loved it

NiGhTFaCe
10-06-07, 06:07 PM
Thank you all :)