Peeking at you in the dark,
Seeing you mourning in tears
Leisurely, I clutch your neck
Showing you the depth of fear
Gawking at you trurning pale,
While i rip out your azure heart

In your eyes, i am the twilight
Your last memory in existence
No more relaity nor delusions
Just this corpse, left on the ground
I am the wish, you yearned for
with pleasure, i made it come true

Wretchedly, I saunter away
Leaving no traces, no clues
you are a secret now, a story
mentioned in funerals & hearsay
I helped you, manipulate with fate
Blessing you with a new life;
On the other side, my dear

I am your deeds, your history
Repaying you, rewriting it
I am the impact, the outcome
Just like water, reflecting you..

Written by : e M o

holy smokes!!... is that someone who killed a person and left her dead?

btw.... great poem... Loved it!!

:cute: Nice of you tripletee you're shooo shweet :p

Actually the poem is about what you have done in the past .. wether it's good or bad it will come back to you .. and in here i wrote about someone who had a "bad" history and it bounced back at him .. and the person WHO killed the other person is meant to be your "deeds" ..

Thank you for passing :love:

Now that's even better...lol... nice moral. thank you for sharing. keep them coming.

Now this is serious lol :P
I love the way it rhymes in the last four lines, overall its AMAZING
KEEP IT UP :D

Wonderfully written eMo :cute:
It's really good
Thanks for sharing ^-^

Great imagination :) Lets read more ..

You made a fantastic use of imagery...And your vocabulary is rich. I liked this poem and the idea in general...It created that dark image that I think you wanted created and the metaphor of the 'past' worked brilliantly.

This is one of my favorite poems...Excellent job.

Thanks allot :-) i appreciate it :cute:

*hugs to all*