View Full Version : A poem ( for fun )


e M o
26-05-07, 02:22 PM
lols i wrote this 2 years ago when people were all crazy about Eminem .. I was thinking , hey i can make Rap Lyrics lolsss and i made it just for fun .. I actually sang it .. what a rapper :p !!

And the funny thing , a friend of mine in her school , she said that there is a poem contest and was like ( kidding ) hey i want to join and she said OK and i was like yeah ? so i was like (hey why not ? i dont care if i lose, it was made for fun anyways )

I entered the contest .. and i have no idea why , why the students loved it and i got 1st place LOLS ( i still don't believe i did ).. so i will share it with you people =D

Sarcastic Dreamer ( local )

- Aha yes yes I wanna be a Bee
Oh don't pardon me, you’re worse than me
I am a nice freak, not a dirty geek
I don't lie then I go and deny

I am an achiever not only a dreamer
I wanna fly high not stay on stand by
I wanna be accepted not always rejected
Ohh don't care about me, I'm only a “Wanna be"

I wanted to be a shrink, to make your day so pink
I'll ask you to chill or just take the freaking pill
People are so shallow; they only eat and swallow
They judge you from your look, and say oh what a jerk!

They tell you: you are a loser! Ohh please who is more fooler?
They can't overlook so I hope they all get broke
And while eating they choke!
I'm not evil, I 'm not mean, all I am is just a human being.

People complain about their pain. I tell them hey soon it'll be in vain.
Life is hell of a journey, makes you groovy or too damn gloomy
That is why I wanna be a Bee

I wanna run from life and away from me.
It's just too much, and I can't take it THAT much
We all need a shoulder and a listening ear
Or at least know what we really feel.

Don't worry about me, Ohh I am somebody
I am not a baby or acting crazy
That is truly me and don't come to lecture me

All I wanna be is to be a Bee
Think for a while and then just maybe
I shall know what is wrong and know how to be strong

I just need to face it, scream, fight or just shake it
My problem is not a living, scary enemy.
It's just a problem and need to solve it quickly

I will be okay. Just pray for me and say it honestly:
May you make it and you shall beat it
Know how to deal with it
And by God's will you shall defeat it
Just remember me and while praying, pray for me......

lols

written by : e M o

Bonita
26-05-07, 03:05 PM
I am an achiever not only a dreamer
I wanna fly high not stay on stand by


I like these two lines


I'm not evil, I 'm not mean, all I am is just a human being.

and this one too




COoOL, I love it:), keep sharing, and hope someday you will be a bee and fly away lol

e M o
26-05-07, 07:31 PM
I love you too Bonita :P .. Thank you for passing =D

TripleTee
26-05-07, 07:36 PM
:XD:...haha... we all went through this rap phrase I suppose. I can understand it :p

nice going

e M o
26-05-07, 07:38 PM
TripleTee ! yeah and the suprising thing i am NOT into rap ! but just gave it a shot .. I think i was in the mood to rap ! Thank you for passing ! *huggies*

Filly
26-05-07, 08:34 PM
lo0ol *applauds* nice one:D hehe enjoyed readin it lol

Dark Project
27-05-07, 11:44 AM
Nice its sounds like a Rap ;)

LosT_SouL
27-05-07, 04:53 PM
Nice try :D

Superbia
27-05-07, 05:03 PM
love the rhyming ;)

Phat
27-05-07, 05:25 PM
Yaw Yaw Yaw, Sup Dare E m O Yo Gat Some Goodie Verses Trackin Dare Yaw, Keep It Dripping. :D

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