Haiku,

Is a Japanese poem stile.
Subject: About nature and seasons. It should not include the author’s feelings and idea. Haiku, describe one moment of time.

Structure: Originally, it is consists of 3 lines, of 5, 7, 5 syllables respectively.

English Haiku: Americans took this stile to English. Now days, the structure of 5, 7, 5 is not followed strictly. 3, 5, 3 structure and other, had been immerged.

Examples of English Haikus:

Drizzle
Distorted street lights
On wet street.
By: Jeanne Sieged

School bell rings
All of shadows
Into one
By: Ruby Sprigs

Waiting news
Hospital deep night
Flowers close
By: Keiko Uehara

Bamboo Shoot
Over red moon
An owl hoots

By: Reiko Nishimora


These are my trials:


A beautiful bee
On a happy red rose
Singing the spring song.

A little sparrow
Playing with his love partner
Sunny warm day.

Lonely standing man
Watching his reflected image
On a water lake.

Two white baby sheep
Enjoying the nature gift
Eating fresh grass

Dark moving cloud
Passing over my busy head
The rain is coming

Man, woman and child
A happy little family
Having group photo

Wisdom of old face
Wisdom of old married man
Love, forgive and smile

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what are you doing in Japan ? if you don't mind.

wooow ..... you are good....
where did you learn all this from? i am really impressed.....

Why do you want to know?!!!<BR>

Thank s dude! I like poetry and I have some. I am now living in Japan. That Is why.

sorry , just curious.

Please Muslim, don’t be angry from me. It is my privacy. Just keep KOOOOL man. http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/biggrin.gif

Omani in Japan , interesting thing http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/smile.gif

i want to know why , but i respect your privacy. keep in touch though , and don't forget your country.

Why people want to know why I am in Japan. So what? The important is our discussion. You ignored the subject http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/frown.gif
I will never, and did't forget my country. I am here for my country my Mother Land, I am Ibn Oman.
But, PLEASE let us talk without opening our privacies! Is this possible? For example, I don’t want to Know who is Muslim or Networker, what Is important to know is "you are members like me here" and your opinions. Is that right?!


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I love Oman and I love you all

[This message has been edited by Ibn Oman (edited 06-05-2000).]

Cool down man , you have the right to protect your privacy http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/smile.gif don't get angery.

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Never odd or even

hey, maybe Ibn Oman is an undercover Omani CID in Japan!!!

it could be la??
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Take it easy, this is only the internet! feel free, coz life is not!

hey ibn oman why u say ur living in Japan !! i know you and u live here in oman !! i saw you so many times in CCC sitting in the coffe shop oo ba3deen if it's true translet this poem to Japanis,,,,,kam 3enet oo geet metwalaah meg9eedy ya shee`7y royakuum,,ma7a9aaly 7aad fel 7elaah ye`7beerny weeen seknakum,,,,,

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Thank you for interring here. But still surprised why it is important to know whom am I? See no one discus or ask a question or reply what I wrote above! This is your problem people. You deflect from the main subject to personal matters. Ok, do you want me to say my name, age, where I live, where I work….
Is matter I am in Oman, Japan, USA the moon to discuss ideas? Why you are caring this much. Ok, to satisfy, I am Omani from Oman, going to CCC, Al-Harthey, Sabco, Al-Fair, Sultan, Al-Khamis Blaza, OC enter,…..So what? Oh. http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/frown.gif http://www.omania.net/evip/ubb/mad.gif


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I love Oman and I love you all