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Talal
13-11-06, 01:17 PM
Well, the same thing, the mic it isn’t that good. I’m planning on something new by the end of this month. Hopefully it works.

Anyways, this track is made by the same software “Fruity Loops studio6”, a very dear person inspired me. And I thought of her while doing it.

Anyways. Here you go.

Download link: The one (http://www.4shared.com/file/5839880/69e17c07/the_one.html)

Enjoy.

Talal
17-11-06, 02:27 PM
15 views and 0 replys :D

well, it was an attempt. it failed but will keep on trying.

Note. The link will stay active, cause i couldnt remove it.

Black Lolly
17-11-06, 02:34 PM
wow nice, i loved the middle part the most en it started getting more intense, very smooth!
lol my sister is passing by she was like "wow! amazing...whats that?"
now it finished shes like "rewind!"
very professional! ;)....
Keep them up i really enjoy them..

Talal
17-11-06, 02:36 PM
:D professional i doubt. but i'm glad you liked it.

The mic is bad, i really need to get something new and good.

death rose
17-11-06, 04:12 PM
one word :
amazing ! :D

i really liked it !!
keep the good work :D

Talal
17-11-06, 06:10 PM
OK, im confused.

What did you love about ti Rapper Gurl, sorry but i hate it and i would like to know what part of the song you really liked, so i can work it out and try to do better next time.

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Thank you Rapper for taking the time. :)

Phat
17-11-06, 06:16 PM
Amazing, As I Said Keep Us Updated.
PS : I Think If There Was No Vocal, Maybe It Would Be Better.

Talal
17-11-06, 06:23 PM
There is no vocals Conjuqater, used the mic for the guitar.

through out the song there is an echoish sound that bugged me and couldn't do anything about it.
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I thank you for taking the time to comment on this one.

Phat
17-11-06, 06:26 PM
Then I Must Be Mistaken, Well Probably That Whispering Like Tones Made Me Feel Like Someone Is Singing, Again, Keep On Improving.
PS : Some Acoustic Guitars Can Be Attached To A Recoder So It Can Be Easily Recorded, Look For Them Its Better Then Using Mics.

Talal
17-11-06, 06:31 PM
Yeah, I was thinking of getting one, but I use mic’s for many purposes, and the plug-in guitars, well its been awhile since the last time I played guitar plus I’m not in too adding guitars in songs a lot, cause with that I will have to add some vocals which suit it, and I don’t have a vocalist and I don’t know any. 

But hey, it’s really a good idea; I might consider that in the future.

death rose
17-11-06, 08:05 PM
OK, im confused.

What did you love about ti Rapper Gurl, sorry but i hate it and i would like to know what part of the song you really liked, so i can work it out and try to do better next time.

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Thank you Rapper for taking the time. :)


hehe
ummmm i liked the begining :cool:
n in the middle

u hate it ??? :os
la la its coool !

Talal
17-11-06, 08:23 PM
Well, im glad you liked it. i will try to look into it, as Conjugater said, i might start using an Acoustic guitar when ever i use such songs.

Miss G
18-11-06, 12:12 AM
gr8 stuff babes... i can c y u would hate it, but u gotta realise there's so much good in it... really :) the first 30-40 seconds need some serious working on, r u using a keyboard by any chance 2 play those notes over the guitar? if u r thn maybe try changing the sound or summin, cuz i mean the beginning just wasnt workin 4 me.... but tht's just me :shy:

Talal
18-11-06, 11:22 AM
Yupe Miss G, i used a keyboard to playe the notes and i do in most of the songs. the sound that come along with the guitar is bugging me that why i didnt like. I might change the whole thing, and i might just throw that away and start a new one. But in both cases i will try to do something good.:)

This is the part where i go like:
I really thank you ppl for your comments. and i will work on your tips.:)

Nella
18-11-06, 09:56 PM
umm, nice! :cute:

i kinda liked the beginning..

well not a work of art but ok!

hey you once talked about ur best being defjam or something like this..where can i find it? :shy:

Talal
18-11-06, 11:56 PM
Thanks Nella, well.. this wasnt any good, but as i said im only playing around.. I just got into it, trying to get samples and tutorials. Anyways im I hope my next work will be any good. :)

Anyways, Here is a link to my online folder (My Music).
Link: http://www.4shared.com/dir/751068/4bf9665e/sharing.html