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Storm
25-09-06, 01:23 AM
Glory Month

Glory to God who chose The month
Where He sent his words from above
Blessed to Our Visitor Called Ramadhan
Which turn all of our days into mercy
To turn to Allah in devotion
Who clears all our sins even if they are as wide as an ocean
It’s the best time to plant seeds of good deed
And search for the ones who are in need
Glory to God Almighty the Generous
Who has given a gift of the month for us
We are like angels for thirty days
With guidance to heaven which He gave us many ways
The reward is far greater than you can imagine when He pays
Be good and repent for what you have done
The visitor may not see you again next year it may not come
So turn to Him with a new heart
And begin your new days and stay close to Him and don’t depart

Storm
25-09-06, 01:25 AM
Thirty Days … A Trip Of Purity

Full of sins and guilt, coming packed with dirt
Breathless, sinking in sour sweat
The sweat of indulgence, prohibited lust

My sins are following me, where can I escape?
They keep running behind
The shadows of my mind, my sick mind

A lengthy list…taller than the way I took to make them
Sins everywhere like ugly beasts
All waiting to wolf me, to crush my bones in hell

They keep singing the same song, same old song
That make me shiver, I used to hear them
All the way back in the tunnels of my memory

Moments of weakness lead me to grief
Grief that led me to more weakness
A cycle of sickness and deterioration

Was close to my miserable death…
Was waiting for the devil to get me a ticket
To hell … to a chair with chains in deep hell

Suddenly passed by me…with its many white hands
It smelled like fresh born forest…Green and snow
Unspoiled water, poring from heaven

Took life off my shoulders and away from my skin
Ran and jumped into chaste water, rubbed my skin with fair snow
Dried my brain under the sparkling sun, the pure air flow

Thirty days the trip will be swift the gif will come and flee
Hope to make a healthy change, or to take bit with me…
Welcome Ramadan, the month of health, the trip of shine & purity.

Storm
25-09-06, 01:26 AM
This month's chain

The doors are opening
The doors are closing

Every one is waiting
Every one is preparing

Some are twitchy
Some are dozy

It’s time for spiritual refresh
It’s time for body diminish

With words from Quran
With dua’as from heart

With prayers of Tarawieh in rows
With wakeful nights in homes

All of us gathered in one place
All of us smiling to each others face

No bad words
No dire actions
No terrible thoughts
No hard feelings

All are gone with this month's approach
All are thrown with these days torch

Poor or rich
Low or high
Black or white
Short or lengthen

It does not matter
It does not bother

As we are one and united
As we are set and delighted

Competing each other
Cherishing one another
Forgiving us and other
Blessing us and the sufferer

This is the aim
This is the fame
That you can gain
In this month’s chain

Storm
25-09-06, 01:26 AM
Good luck to all :)

This Poll will close by end of this month Inshallah

Dark Project
25-09-06, 09:33 AM
wooooooooooo 3 poems only ???

FaRaSHa
25-09-06, 02:42 PM
....LOL....Now i can understand why StormSilent was disappointed......:os

...Only 3 poems for this compt!....

....well at least they aren't bad at all a difficult topic to write about and concentrate in one thing in it...but at least some tried to write....:)

....I will give my vote soon....:yes:

...good luck...

...and bless all....

Senorita
25-09-06, 03:09 PM
My vote went to Glory Month :)

nosa
25-09-06, 03:55 PM
i loved the second n last a lot. the second for it's very deep meaning n how i somtimes feeel.. n the last for it's easy going words n simplicity..

ok now this is hard.. i think ill voted for the second ..

Frozen Echo
25-09-06, 05:10 PM
Voted for "Glory Month"
The second one was good but I wanted something soft.
Third one to me was lacking something.

Goodluck to all.
Ramadhan kareem.

Storm
26-09-06, 10:50 PM
Ya DP ... only 3 :( .... but I loved them all

Good luck ...

Members keep voting .. we have till end of the month

$w€€ŧ¥
26-09-06, 11:17 PM
I love the poem with deep meaning :cute:

Tiny Heart
27-09-06, 12:53 AM
the words in Thirty Days .. A Trip of Purity r so amazing... i think it deserves 2 win... :) good luck..

Storm
29-09-06, 01:16 AM
For those who didn't give thier vote yet .... 2 more days

Don't miss the chance :)

*FaLLiNG STaR*
29-09-06, 02:13 AM
All of the 3 are really good, but 1 & 3 got my attention most. So my vote goes to "Glory Month". :)

Storm
29-09-06, 09:08 PM
Only 15 vote !!!!

Come on guys ....

fatamooo
30-09-06, 03:31 AM
Glory month :)

Phat
30-09-06, 03:38 AM
Glory Month.