Ok i will keep this thread just for my poems i will add my poems here.
This is called : JUDGMENT DAY

-The day will come when u will cry

-Tears will drop down until your eyes will dry

-Regreting all the facts, being a bad guy

-Facing god u must be very shy

-Asking youself, 'I did all those bad things why?'

-U wish u had wings so u can fly

-To hide behind the mountains high.

-Oh god almighty, give me another chance I'll do my best I'll try

-what I did was bad I don't deny

-you showed me the right path and I didn't reply


-I dont have no one to rely


-all my friends just run by


-please forgive me, I am afraid of the punishment that u will apply


BY SPIRAL


Hope u like it:)

Nice :) good way of writing it all.

nice work spiral :) show us more

Thanks 2 u Stigma and Senorita

Hey hey hey :) Nice and good advice too keep it up ... I will read all your poems ;)

Thanks DP, Glad 2 hear that ;)

Wonderful put and organized, into the steps of making words into live motion!
keep them coming and welcome to our Arts sabla :)

waoooo , nice one ,spiral :)
that interesting ,keep it up ;)

Nice S keep them coming :)

The undelying message is very meaningful Spiral. :) A very nice piece.

very nice wallah :)
where da rest of urs, cant wait 2 read ém

We need to read more come on write write write ;) Spiral

Thanks to all ok this is another one for my bro which i havent seen in years

My Brother

-These few words go to you my dear brother


-Its been a while since we saw each other


-Days pass by one after another


-Distance between us makes it harder to meet


-everytime i remember you, you were so kind and sweet


-you always tought me to stand on my feet


-U said liitle bro life is hard u should always compete


-be careful Bad people around u try to cheat


-Good people dont mistreat


-The mistakes u have done dont repeat


- remember little bro without you life is incomplete


-Thinking of u my heart starts to beat


-Love u bro, hope one day we will meet.

by Spiral

I like :) Keep it up