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Spiral
11-05-06, 04:39 PM
Ok this is just to see my abilities in writing a poem am new in this:

Sitting in the middle of the night waiting for the sun to rise and shine

Looking for a person and wondering with whom i will combine

Is love simple and easy like drawing a straight line

I pray to you god oh please show me a sign

If she is the one bless us and help our relation be fine.


By Spiral

To be continued........

stigma
11-05-06, 04:40 PM
nice :) and waiting for the continuation

Monkiette
11-05-06, 04:42 PM
cum on.. more.. we want more:)

Frozen Echo
11-05-06, 04:45 PM
Keep it up man.
Good work.

Spiral
11-05-06, 04:49 PM
Thanks to all, i will write more:)

Lym
11-05-06, 04:52 PM
Yes and in no time, you will be writing poems we have to decipher to understand ;)

stigma
11-05-06, 05:16 PM
wabooy, whats decipher, lol

Spiral
11-05-06, 05:35 PM
wabooy, whats decipher, lol
LOL wabooy typical omani lol decipher means unkwon words or coded reading them with difficulty.

Senorita
11-05-06, 09:25 PM
lol stig.
nice one Spiral :) keep 'em coming.