Dreams of the Sea

[E-Sensation]

Finally am done composing this music, enjoy it:

http://www.isound.com/mp3player/play.php?type=song&id=36757

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Hope to have some feedback about it! thanks :)

[MsKnuckles]

you composed that? mashalla .. not bad at all...
how did u do it? :think:

[NiGhTFaCe]

I liked that, it was putting me in this mood. But, there was this part which I didnt like, I feel it out of the whole thing.

[Pineapple Thief]

Hey, its pretty cool indeed :o I love how it builds to about 1:05, but from 1:05 to 1:09 I feel it goes off, mood changes and its premature...the section after that is great too

All in all I quite like it! Ill give it another listen soon to get more out of it :)

[E-Sensation]

Thanks guys! ^.^

TT, let's leave the 'how I did it' part ok? :):) I'll just say that it took me about two months to write the music and put it all together.. It's just too much to explain the whole thing lol.

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Nighty, thanks.. could you tell me which part please? Just to know where I went wrong and try to correct it.. It'd be appreciated.

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PT, thanks a lot for your input PT. Amm, do you think I should change the melody in the time you specified? Cuz I was thinking of it as a moment of 'seriousness' .. You know, angry style? :p lol

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By the way guys, if you're interested you can check the other music I did. Just click here:

http://www.isound.com/music/enigmatic_sensation/

Then click on [all mp3s] .. I hope you enjoy them too ^.^

[MsKnuckles]

lol... ok, only one question then... was it done through the pc itself or by usin an instrument and recording it? choose one... if it's neither and too complicated, never mind then... good work nevertheless...:)

[E-Sensation]

by using my piano keyboard, I connect it to the computer and then record. The connection thingy is not really complicated, the melody was hehe..

Thanx again TT I appreciate your curiousity *.^

[ti3gib]

It gave me .. and Enegmatic sensations ... It's lovely and soothing ...

There are two keys that don't work on keyboard ( Pepsi and electric circuts don't go well with eachother ) .. I would've tried to record a little something ...

Your good on the board ...

[Pineapple Thief]

well E, its just a couple of those chords, i think you out to remove them. The song is progressive, and I think its too short. Ideally, I think you should expand it to about 6 minutes or so, gradually building up, and with that sort of aggression at the end :p before calming down again as you made it. It would be great then! :D

[Pineapple Thief]

PS ive downloaded the others and im listening to regret now

[Solafa]

sallam,

The truth, i liked it alot....

MAshallah 3alik.

And i know which part did NiGhTFaCe refer....


But at first i thought the same, but when i listend to it again, i think it is well played....for reading back the title of this music "Dreams of the Sea"; which describe how is the Actual nature of the sea....it is always calm, clear sky and beautiful clear water surface and once in a sudden it will all change and be so harsh and stormy , dark sky and cloudy, and then it calms back and goes nice and quiet as if nothing wrong was there...


this is how i imagined it.....:)

You know, you are reminding me with my self 15-16 years ago, when i used to play on a Key board, and i did creat my own short music, that i tought it my sister, but i forgot how to play it and she became mashallah better than me....

:)

[Pineapple Thief]

Yeah, u make me want to write music again :D i used to write music until about the summer, and I lost everything i wrote when my harddrive crashed :os

[NiGhTFaCe]

Nighty, thanks.. could you tell me which part please? Just to know where I went wrong and try to correct it.. It'd be appreciated.
I am not sure. But, I think at 1:00 or 1:05.

[Jubran]

nice playing E-Sensation.

[E-Sensation]

It gave me .. and Enegmatic sensations ... It's lovely and soothing ...


lmao. I like that! ^.^ Thanks ti3gib.

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PT, me very happy to hear your view, but come on.. 6 minutes! hehe.
Actually ideas are coming, so stay tunned my man.. Oh, and sorry to hear that you lost all the hardwork! Still, maybe you can share with us what you remember, no? Thanks again :D

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Solafa, you imagined it well, pretty well. But one thing, I didn't mean by sea the 'actual sea' that we all know.. meant something else. ;)
It's great to know you played piano before as well.. amm why did you stop?
Again, thaaanx! :D

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Nighty, I got what you mean.. maybe because at this timing I played it fast.. so I'll fix that inshallah.. :)

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Jubran, honored to know you liked it sir =)

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Thank you all again am glad you had sometime to check this modest creation ^.^

[Solafa]

Solafa, you imagined it well, pretty well. But one thing, I didn't mean by sea the 'actual sea' that we all know.. meant something else. ;)
It's great to know you played piano before as well.. amm why did you stop?
Again, thaaanx! :D



Sallam,

Ohhhh, so my imagining was all wrong:(


But never mind, this is how i thought it to be:) though it is still great to hear it...

what did you mean by the "SEA" in your title?:)

Well, it needed lots of time to practice on it, and at them days i was more occupied by my books than music... :angel:

so had to stop and fill my room with more books.

[NaBHaN]

I know I'm late but my net hasnt been helpful lately so I just got to listen to the full thing today. I think it's quite lovely... some bits drag..but over all is a sweet attempt. thanks for sharing. :)

[E-Sensation]

Solafa, :) ..I meant the heart.. :)

Nabs, it's always better than never. Thanks mate I really appreciate it.

[Solafa]

Sallam,


Got you......:)

You are right to call the Heart by the Sea, as it is indeed a deep sea inour body... :blush:

[Paradise Babe]

Creative mashallah.. made me day dream.. keep it up..

[stigma]

maaaan, its niiice :) keep them up :)

[Cute_One]

u really do have artistic hands .. its one beautiful peice of work mashalla

[E-Sensation]

Glad you all liked it =)