Ok I took the ideas from Blue_Chi's theards which are :
-Expired I (http://www.englishsabla.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=16012)
-Expired II (http://www.englishsabla.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=16055).
Also this is my first time to deal with 3D transformation using PhotoShop to make that can. It really took me more than 2 hours to do this work *not professional :sorry:*. I dont recall my work a copy of Blue_Chi's work but I'm just trying to start making similar things to improve my skills on designing ;).

I need comments anyway :)

http://www.etmadness.com/fast_hacking/temp/xpiry.jpg

I think I have to give comments for myself :D

Duh All forums are the same. Supporting Gz and most of the moderator are not in the right place though :p

See ya around guys. NOW no need for the comments thanks alot :)

Hello FastHacking,

There is a problem with your background and forground depths, the can seems too bright, and it requires some shading at the sides, I think that because your background is too dark that made it look weird.

The actual 3D-isation of the can is alright, although that you need some more shading.

The tiny text you have put is unclear because you didn't use a multiple of 8 as your size, this is a pixel font you are using as you know.

I think that your designs are becoming better, you need to try harder and you would be one of the best one day.

Duh All forums are the same. Supporting Gz and most of the moderator are not in the right place though
What is that supposed to mean? :lost:

First of ALL thanks ALOT brotha/... you always the right person to give me comments.
Originally posted by Blue_Chi
What is that supposed to mean? :lost:

Obviously none of the moderators of this section give comments for the members who are showing their work. Maybe I'm the only one who dont get comments except You and thats why I do like your Works ALWAYS

I wonder Why KamaKazy didnt set you a moderator here as well :D
Moderators who are suppost to be here, should give comments for every work done by the memebrs or at least to say "good work keep it up" are they going to lose something ??? Is this a way to make members Stay proudly here? or it is a way to get them out ??

Suggestions to the Adminstrator: Set either Blue_Chi or Concept | Zero or Evillio to be moderator here :fire:

REGARDS

well i comment on the art work that moves me.. and things that i find that are fresh and new.

stuff like part 2 or 3 or a million.. are usually too boring for me to even look at.. but i take the time to look at them.

i have seen this thread since the first min u opened it..but found it to similar to Blue chi's work..and so it didnt move me.. thus didnt comment.

a moderator is supposed to look after the sabla and make sure everything is going on smoothly. commenting to posts is just a bonus. :) , i moderate the WHOLE art sabla.. including music and movies and the rest. i cant post in ever single thread. but hey.. u have blue chi.. doesnt mean that he HAS to be a mod here . DUH. if anything technical needs to be done..then am here in no time.

have a good day..and keep em comming. am sure u have fans here.

fast hacking, sometimes it's better not having comments than Having one!

Like I am gonna do!

This is One stupid coloring u did! - Donot u feel ashamed of calling this an Art?!

i dont agree with you MusicMan . ! the over all design is really great . but i must say that there is a problem in coloring the cylender .

and MusicMan . i have a coment on your reply [[This is One stupid coloring u did! - Donot u feel ashamed of calling this an Art?! ]]

this is not a cevilised way to replay on pplz posts . if you say it is not good . then explain your point.

"and MusicMan . i have a coment on your reply
this is not a cevilised way to replay on pplz posts . if you say it is not good . then explain your point." Cocept Zero


Originally posted by MusicMan
fast hacking, sometimes it's better not having comments than Having one!


He said : He wants comments so I give him!

:D :D :D looool , comments . haaa ??

NaBHaN ok I got your point though. If am going to face problems I will defiinitly contact you :)
and Yeah I've Blue_chi C-Z and Evillio and some others for commenting ;) appreciated from them :)


C-Z thanks alot man :) I think that I changed the can's color but lazy to work on APS nowadays .. I am too loaded in my studies for the coming three week TEST, QUIZZES , ASSIGNMENTS ESSAIES and so on :lost: but eventually I'm enjoying of that just wish me the luck :)

MM : PLEASE for ALLAH sake give me a break I couldnt stop :D

!eeh :barf: thanks for the comments anyways *weird*

i like the colours and everything
but the Friend can colour, ORANGE, doesnt look nice...

Thanks alot haso0onie :p

which color you suggest ?

Salam again :)

here is what i modified on ;) I got many comments and I was confused which one shall I consider !! and I didnt considered one yet till I get comment on this one though ;)

http://www.etmadness.com/fast_hacking/temp/nxpiry.jpg

- The can looks much better now.
- The font you used for "expiry" doesnt really suit the image.
- The Sentence on the side " True friendship never expired" should be "True friendship never expires"
- That little arrow beside the can looks out of place.

i guess thats all for now.

thanks buddy :) feel better now :)

Hello FastHacking,

I like the colours more there, the can fits better into the background here, but the text "Friendship" doesn't look cylindrical anymore, I think that you should do something with it, maybe make it horizontal in the can rather than making it lean to one side.

I still think that the small text inside the box in the upper right side should be readable, you do that by changing the size to "8".

The colour of the word "Expiry" should be in white rather than gray, that would make it better I think.

The text vertically put on the left side of the main square should be "NOT ANTILIASED" you change that from the "Character Panel" in Phothoshop, plus, the size should be a MULTIPLE of 8, make sure you do that.

You are improving keep the good work.

ok here's what I made regarding to NaBHaN's comments but I didnt do anything to the arrows, because looks better there to me.
I will try today to work on Blue_Chi comments ;) .

any Others ?

http://www.etmadness.com/fast_hacking/temp/n_xpiry.jpg