OK, I updated my old Expired image, I've realized true frienship never expires.

http://www.theblueconcepts.com/~blue_chi/temp/never_expired.jpg

Here is the old one if people would like to compare.
http://www.englishsabla.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=16012

I like this one better because you've got some more white in it and the two white strips don't stand out so out of place anymore.

both of them are really nice

i liked the first one more. this one seems to be too crowded.

well, this is better then the last one .
but didnt know what these can mean , there .
also the font and the position of the writing at the top left corner is not good!
also thye white hexagonal shape at the same corner dosent fit with the design .
you ised the same zoom in effect at the back of your design here . but here it is not clear . but in this design it adds another dimention to your design .
on the other side . the flame like effect is really cool . and it is the thing that making this design stand out .


conceptoo

but didnt know what these can mean , there.

This image about about fake friendship, just like can food, you buy it knowing that it has an expiry date, it is used and thrown away.

but didnt know what these can mean , there .
also the font and the position of the writing at the top left corner is not good!
also thye white hexagonal shape at the same corner dosent fit with the design .

Concept Z, I have no idea of what you are talking about, I cannot see the a problem with these.

you ised the same zoom in effect at the back of
What zoom effect? :lost:

the older version is less complicated as Nabhan mentioned. I think its too frilly , the concept is great though. I prefer the wordings on the can that says friendship on the older version. the colours are stunning too and the message is clearer.my two cents at being an art critic :D heheheh