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Homeless
02-10-03, 03:05 AM
Does it hurt when u think of me today
Does it hurt when u turned the other way

Do u regret letting go and leaving me behind
Do u wish to erase the damage and press rewind?

Do u ask urself why u hurt me and made me cry
Do u keep on wondering and asking urself why?

Are u hurting because i am not a mess anymore
And that it doesnt bother me now that u have walked out of the door

You were not sure of how it happened and why u did what u did
You were not sure y u used me and played me as a bid!

Does it feel like the tables have turned and its not my loss
Does it piss u off like crazy knowing that u r not the boss

Does it make u feel stupid to realize that u care
Does it make u feel sorry for being so unfair?

How does it feel now that u know Ive moved on.
How does it feel to know that Iam completly Gone

How do u feel now knowing that all the feelings dissapeared
You thought it was impossible. I bet it feels weird.

Instead of asking why u broke my heart and burst.
Burst into tears of what went wrong at first?

Im asking questions to prove a point here
No matter how close u think u r , u r not near.

Your as far as u can get, dont u see
I am over u for good. Its all about me

But I still wonder, does it hurt letting me go!
Cause if u ever wanna come back then the answer is NO!


I wrote this right now
Hope u all think its good

silver_ring
02-10-03, 03:07 AM
Originally posted by Homeless
Does it hurt when u think of me today
Does it hurt when u turned the other way

Do u regret letting go and leaving me behind
Did u wish to erase the damage and press rewind?

Do u ask urself why u hurt me and made me cry
Do u keep on wondering and asking urself why?

Does it occure to u that u threw something valuble out the door.
Does it kill u up inside now that u r not sure

You were not sure of how it happened and why u did what u did
You were not sure y u used me and played me as a bid!

Does it feel like the tables have turned and its not my loss
Does it piss u off like crazy knowing that u r not the boss

Does it make u feel stupid to realize that u care
Does it make u feel sorry for being so unfair?

How does it feel now that u know Ive moved on.
How does it feel to know that Iam completly Gone

How do u feel now knowing that all the feelings dissapeared
You thought it was impossible. I bet it feels weird.

Instead of asking why u broke my heart and burst.
Burst into tears of what went wrong at first?

Im asking questions to prove a point here
No matter how close u think u r , u r not near.

Your as far as u can get, dont u see
I am over u for good. Its all about me

But I still wonder, does it hurt letting me go!
Cause if u ever wanna come back then the answer is NO!


I wrote this right now..
Hope its good


nice try :D

Are u hurting because i am not a mess anymore
And that it doesnt bother now that u have walked out of the door

Homeless
02-10-03, 03:20 AM
wht do u mean nice try?
u think I didnt write it
it was just a typing mistake ok!!

o rab el ka3ba I wrote it right now so stopp throwing false accusations........

Homeless
02-10-03, 03:26 AM
If u havent noticed there were acouple of spelling mistakes and grammer I corrected
plus 2 verses were messed up
I wrote it directly from my head on the post and not on microsofot work or on paper first maybe thats y the keyboard/typing mistake occured....


I dont care wht ppl think about me or whether they believe I wrote this or not but I have SO many ppl who know i am an okay poem writter cuz I actually wrote stuff in arabic and english right infront of their eyes during classes and many of them r members of the sabla and they know iam saying the truth

thank u very much anwyay ,,,,

silver_ring
02-10-03, 03:29 AM
Originally posted by Homeless
wht do u mean nice try?
u think I didnt write it
it was just a typing mistake ok!!

o rab el ka3ba I wrote it right now so stopp throwing false accusations........

heeeeeeeeeeeeey stop swearing dear !!! did i say that ..

wallah i believed you

Homeless
02-10-03, 03:31 AM
so what do u think then? lol :D

silver_ring
02-10-03, 03:37 AM
even me i write in arabic only ...

any way ... bcuz you wrote it from ur head direct i said nice try

Homeless
02-10-03, 03:42 AM
yeah then I miss understood
thx

B S Al Hassani
11-10-08, 12:36 AM
good one...

minerva
11-10-08, 12:39 AM
yeah then I miss understood
thx

how poignant!!! rest in peace dear, even though i don't know you, and i was never here when you were active, your words will keep you alive in the minds of those who loved you.