I wrote this at work this morning.
It isnt that good.
Just something to pass time while I was bored



Broken


Who said whats broken cannot be fixed
Its just like a puzzle that got to get mixed

As long as u find the pieces and set them right
Your heart will slowly heal. It just needs a fight

A fight against the feelings that cause all the pain
Feelings making u go crazy and driving u insane

Just play ur cards right to unbreak ur heart
Revocer from the sadness the damage has start

You will end the mess that was meant to be
Cause its just an experince. A test for u and me

Things always go bad and u think its wrong
But u have to suffer to learn to be strong

A broken Heart does have a cure
Its not a disease and thats for sure

Its just a phase everyone goes through
Its a bump in life. What can we do?

I know its a feeling that eats you up inside
But to make it go away, you shouldnt hide

You hold the pieces to this depressing game
Once u give up ,you'll never b the same

You think life sucks and its just unfair
The truth is u have ppl who love u and r willing to share

So this is my message to you, my dearest friend
Soon u'll be happy. Its not the end



By:Hommie

homeless, I like it ... very nice :)

really? thank u :)

A heart is broken but there is still hope...I like that Homeless and you writing this poem is a good start ;)

thank u xp :)

Nice words, and I do believe that broken hearts could be healed if you find the right person to heal it.

That was good!

i like it

but it would be wonderful if it was written in arabic cuz our lang is rich >>>


i like to write too but i write in arabic cuz in arabic words can easily touch your heart and its full of magic and can express yourself in different ways


can i write in arabic here in this sablah?:confused:

Blue Mind why don't you check this thread >>> "Different Human Feelings" they have some nice poems as well.