View Full Version : My Poems! - The Talent of Copying.


MusicMan
28-09-03, 01:57 PM
All I really need is
Love and hUGS
That's what moves me

Her eyes are pure emotion
Her smiles because she knows
How much I love the way she makes me feel inside
She answers all my requests
Who could ask for more than this
Doesn't have to say I love you
All I need she tells me with her eyes



She heals me, She touches me down to my heart
My hearts beating out of control
I just need a little time with you


love me baby
It's all I really need from you
Don't need your body baby
Just want you love me baby
Cause that's what makes me honey
Love me baby

MusicMan
28-09-03, 01:59 PM
What do you think guys? Do you like my Talent?

Cerulean
28-09-03, 05:02 PM
Dyou really want me to answer that? :rolleyes:

Dark Project
28-09-03, 05:47 PM
MusicMan ,

There is no Talent in Copying any poem or try to make it sounds original as it would look and sound fake .
Now for the poem you have posted it has no taste or feelings or direction or correction nor expression ...
Its bunch of words crumbled on top of each other trying to make sense out of it and has no heart beat .. Basically the poem you posted is dead .....

MusicMan
28-09-03, 06:55 PM
No worries! - There is more poems coming!

X-press
29-09-03, 12:25 PM
MusicMan,

if you want to post any poems, you have to say if you are the one who composed them; if not, you have to write the name of the author or your posts/thread can be deleted by the art mod or admin.

Azure
29-09-03, 02:21 PM
here we go again :gap: