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Fast_HacKinG
23-09-03, 02:42 AM
I just made this for my friend's engagement .. what do you think ..
I made it within 6 minutes or more minutes . myself I didnt like it that much .. *weird and strange* I made like more than 6 layers and merged 2 images then made it transparent..

check the attachment though :S

BliNd_MelOn
23-09-03, 05:35 AM
Well..it is rather a nice idea... Well done! :)

But i think the colors are too plain... ? It should be colorful..
And the words on the bottom right arent very clear..they should be in different color and font...

Just my opinion! :sweat:

selma
23-09-03, 09:18 AM
Originally posted by Fast_HacKinG
I just made this for my friend's engagement .. what do you think ..
I made it within 6 minutes or more minutes . myself I didnt like it that much .. *weird and strange* I made like more than 6 layers and merged 2 images then made it transparent..

check the attachment though :S

6 mins or more... it is very good...

But I should say that the card is screaming, hey look at me I am boring!

The combination of the colors isnt eye catching. Change the colors to happy ones, something with blue, white..... and whats up with the black crow?? If you want to put birds how about the
Doves?

Please take off those Images of a man there..

BUt the message that you gave there is very beautiful..

:)

Fast_HacKinG
25-09-03, 09:16 PM
ok I just adjust it :)

hope you will like it :)

I added blue to the background and I think the crow is good idea there though

http://www.etmadness.com/fast_hacking/temp/newe.jpg

Comments again ?

Fast_HacKinG
26-09-03, 12:39 PM
where is everybody though :confused:

haso0on
26-09-03, 01:06 PM
serously doesnt look like something for love
love is suppose to be in bright colors
but these colors r dark and dull

Homeless
26-09-03, 01:35 PM
I think its unique ..
something different

its not very dull though Hasooon!!

Fast_HacKinG
27-09-03, 03:36 AM
I think I've said that I made this image and I wasnt in the good mood !! .. anyway .. eventhough it does NOT shows something related to love or something; I just tried to make something different from usual. If you've focused more in the image you gonna see a woman's eye centered by a man. Actually this E-card not really ceremonious one, it is just like expressing what I felt when my friend has chosen his ever couple.

Thanks for the kind comments anyways ;)

Any more comments ?

Blue_Chi
27-09-03, 08:42 PM
I think that you have put some effort in it, but for some reason, the image is just not FOCUSED enough, there is no main object in it and it just seems like a kind of background to another object that was not placed at the end.

For a card to be "love" related it does not have to be red or pink, it could be blue, black, or white, but you have to give it a "theme" or a colour scheme to follow, the very first one was very dull and in no way would be excepted as a love card. The colour of the second one is more exceptable.

There is not much to comment on in the card as it looks a little bit empty to me, what you can try to do is add something CLEAR at the top right corner, like a plain white arrow or a plain white heart or text, something very clear and sharp, you could also try to put some more translucent text in the body of the card, and it does not have to be extremely translucent, but just with some sort of transparency to follow the rest of the scheme.

You card is not really bad, but it just looks incomplete.

- Blue_Chi

Fast_HacKinG
29-09-03, 08:59 AM
thanks BLuE_CHi for the effectual and professional comments and suggestions I really appreciate it ... it is kind of you

anyway I might design a new one soon for Ramdhan inshallah... just await it ;)