View Full Version : A Can design!


EviliO
22-09-03, 07:18 PM
This can here was originally made by a friend of mine... Vampy.
He made the plain red can in swift 3D.. and i thought of adding some stuff to it...

Here is the result i came up with..

http://home.iprimus.com.au/rsaleh/evi/can.jpg

Any comments?

concept | zero
22-09-03, 10:18 PM
so what did you add here exactly . lool .
well , i give it 7.5/10
caus the colors i didnt like them , i mean red with gray ... !!!
what about trying red with maroon , siure it will be better , EviliO


.. just try it and see .

EviliO
24-09-03, 12:59 AM
Everything other than the plain red can is what i did.
Including the text on the can it self.... is it mor eclearer now? :rolleyes:

I tend to like the combination of red and gray...
Red and maroon?? hmm... doesn't seem appealing to me!!

haso0on
24-09-03, 01:02 AM
not bad
nice work

Libellula
24-09-03, 11:45 AM
Pretty cool! :)
i like the red and grey, though maybe you should've use a lighter shade of grey so that the red stood out more.

Nah, red and maroon.. can't see that happening.


Rating: 8.5/10

Blue_Chi
24-09-03, 10:23 PM
It is OK, I love SWiFT 3D, making a can in it is the next easiest thing after moving the mouse :D .

The can itself is not bad at all, although that more work could have been put in the exportion process, the blue glow is just out of place, the colours look a little bit boxy, but again, I think that this is really acceptable.

The way that you put the word "Coke" on the can could have been better, SWiFT 3D can make create cylindrical text, I have made one of these long time ago and I believe some people here might have seen it, but I do not have the file with me RIGHT now. I will try to upload it soon and show it to you.

The ribbon around the can is actually cool, a very nice attempt I must say, the parts at the back look almost perfect, but at the front the text "Coka Cola" has messed it up I guess, it just looks too flat.

The background text is ok, I always love to use that effect myself, but I think that you should have made the text sharper by using "aliased" text rather than anti-aliased smooth text.

Overall, I will give it a 8/10, it is a good peice of work, although that I believe you should get a new e-signiture, :gap: .

concept | zero
24-09-03, 11:26 PM
maaan , i ment [ Gray with Maroon ]
like this design i made long time a go
http://www.omanserv.com/aura/images/adv_bc.jpg

it is better then red with gray . right :sweat:

haso0on
25-09-03, 12:55 AM
woow
thats really nice
and the colors are amazing

EviliO
25-09-03, 01:12 AM
You had some good point Blue_chi.

- The word coke wasn't put on the can in swift 3D but in another program. I my self have never used swift 3D before.

- You were right about the coca-cola word as it didn't go with the 3D effect of the background.

- Yeah i had some probs with this text background... i made it aliased now and used the hoog font on it. As the previous pixel font wasn't a size 8 font.

About my signiture? I love that font :D and am not changing it :gap:


Concept... i see red and gray!!
Have seen this one before though ;)

Blue_Chi
25-09-03, 04:02 AM
Evilio, it would be nicer if you actually upload your editted version on a different name rather than just overwritting your previous file because our comments would not make any sense to people who have not seen the original work, plus it would be better to COMPARE the improvements.

EviliO
25-09-03, 05:50 AM
right, here is the modified one....

http://home.iprimus.com.au/rsaleh/evi/can 1.jpg