Hiii.....

Well.. I do have this thing about poems.. i've always loved them anyway... it runs in the family and I first started writing my poems at the age of 6. I'm planning on publishing my own books of poems one day..Inshallah.. & just though I'd share just a few of my recent ones with u....
plzz let me know what u think of it...thnx

When I close my eyes and Fall asleep
I wonder if my passion is one of deep
I sink in the thought that lead me astray
It's like the ocean centering the bay
Don't others have feelings
Or is it just me
Convincing my soul so heavily
That love has gone
And hope is done
Lack of sweet emotions
Raise the feeling of needing more portions
Remember the times we'd share together
In my heart it'll last forever
For blank memories of the soul of one
Gets rid of nothing but the life of fun
Do I deserve to live this way
Plz tell me that love will come one day
To make me smile, to gain more hope
To put on weight on that skinny rope
Does anyone care, does anyone know
I feel so sad, that makes me low
So please my god,I pray everyday
To make me one of the brightest ray
I stand rpoud with fullfilled dignity
It's really pushy, neither it's amusing
I just dream of paradise heaven and all
Deteste demons, devils and the evil hall
Fight problems, Destroy worries
Grow smile, Plant glory
Live long, last long,
love long and tear short
Your wildest fantasy is coming your way
So be prepared to live your days
& don't miss a chance, who knows,
might be a flash, while or eternity
Love yourself, neither don't trust
Believe in your spirits it's stylish dust
Quit the sacrifising, it's no better than loving.

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Remember those sweet times we'd share together
Remember the times we though we'd live forever
Remember the smiles we brought up
Remember the days you's say "Sup!"
Remember the laughter that shone our faces
Remember the traces of our warmth filled paces
Remember the dance, remember the meal,
Remember the fights, remember the feel,
Remember remember remember a million remembers....
But Don't remember one thing,
For bad memories it brings,
The pain you've caused
The hurt that paused
The tears you brought
The lies you thought
The wickedness you've lived
The feelings you've gived
The love you've hidden
The patince you've forbiden
The back you've turned on
The evil you've done
Ooooh enough with the sobers, I don't care about losers!

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I'm having difficulties trying to end this one guys.. :)

Why O Why?
Do you leave in such a drastic way?
You never said "good-bye". & Now when I look
into the sky, I wonder Why O Why ?
I'm just proud of the two of us
One thing which we cared for the deep trust
And that's one thing that forever will last
Good-bye my friend, Untill then I'm sorry for the
Past and hope that our friendship will always longly last.

I miss you, I miss you, Why did you leave me?
I love you, and I will always love you too.
I'll always be there for you, there for you, there for you..
There for you, yes baby...there for you....

Life's so dull without your laughter
Life's so sad without your smile
Everyday it's getting hotter
Just the way it is in Nile

Why is life so tough
The sea so rough
The mean so vein
The illusive rain
The sky so high
I wonder why
I wanna cry
I fear to die
The birds that sing
The tune they bring
The way they live
The meaning they give
The sorrow you gave
The money you save
The love we share
Is so very fair

I miss you... I miss you soooo, & babe I will always miss youu....

I'm waiting for the day
That I will be gay
I always pray
For you to stay
Soo.. Plz. Come back...

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I'd really appreciate any suggestion or comments.... :)
& If you have any poems that YOU have made up..plz let us hear it...

PS. Nothing in the sweet meanings ;) of those poems refer to me or my life :)

I'd really appreciate any suggestion or comments.... :)
& If you have any poems that YOU have made up..plz let us hear it...

PS. Nothing in the sweet meanings ;) of those poems refer to me or my life :)

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heheheh My heart is urs (LOL) Kidding
Good super emotional..super pational...super feelings..u have there.....V good work...And hey...keep them comming!
let us travel withing ur mystical Feelings and go far away
again: V good work..wanna publish it...sure...why not..we will wait..and i will be the 1st 1 who will buy ur Book!

You have noticeable talent good luck to you.
mine aren't as good as yours but here is one of them :

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many lasses I have seen
in many places I have been
but no one came closer to you
no one could ever matches you
your face is breath taking
while your eyes are bewitching
you are irresistible you are unbelievable
you are the sun, you are the moon
you are an Angel you are the tune
you are my water that I drink
and my pure air that I breath
you are my must you are my need
wherever I go whatever my deed.
without you sun will never shine
without you I am lost in no ground
do I need to cry do I need to kneel down
I’ll do my best and leave the rest
these are my confessions to admit
I had to be strong I had to be blunt
but its all down to you now
its you who will decide
its you who could make me cry
and you , I mean the same you........
could land me on the holly ground.
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[Edited by nzwani on 04-29-2001 at 09:36 PM]

in that case, u 2 can make a magnificent 'Poems'
and publish 'em.


how about joining hands and produce something?

wishing u all the best.


and thank u 'Omania Sablah'

I think ur poems r very good I write poetry myself and it has also been in my family .(My grand father was a poet(allah yer7amu)).I will join in with u with my poets next time and I hope u'll like them.

Thanx guys.... glad u liked 'em...!!!!
Nizwani.... i like ur poem... especially the beggining of it :d

Aywa ya a'7wani atareena 3indina nass!! loOlz.. thats great.. Nizwani, and I_Maskari i mean for your Age mashallah!! thats really good!! keep it up girli!!

Omania18



yes please, do....we are anxious; especially, u said from your grandfather.

<b>
I was walking down the street
It was gloomy and raining sleet
couldn't even hear the voice of my moving feet
couldn't find shelter to absorb some heat......
......as home was still far to reach
exhausted, shocked, and speechless ............that what I felt
terrible, freak, and strange or even funny......that what left
can I recover can I still manage to live.
when togetherness was mandatory......she left me alone
when happiness was compulsory..........sadness came close.
will she ever come to realise,,
will she ever come to understand,,
what broken heart holds inside ???

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I love the begigngni of ur poem ..!!! hmm... why is it always the beg. ??[i] hehe coincidence ;)
heeeey... we have osmething in common ..!!

That ur leaving leaving........

<b><i>I wrote this one when I first fell completely (you know what I mean):</i>

<B>
The only thing I want, The only Thing I need
Is you

The only thing I see, the only thing I hear
Is you

The only thing I drink, The only thing I breath
Is you

let me fly, let me touch the sky
The only thing I want, The only thing I need
Is you

close your eyes, put your ear on my heart
you will learn what you mean to me.

hold my hands, come closer to me
you will feel what you mean to me
you will realise.....
The only thing I want the only thing I need is you.

look straight on my eyes
you will see what you mean to me

The only thing I want the only thing I need is you.



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[Edited by nzwani on 05-07-2001 at 02:35 AM]

I am searching for life...don't you know that??

I have to move on....

good luck.