[hey ppl wazzup...i wrote a poem n well im jst a beginer but i jst wanted 2 know wht y'all think of it!! .. well here goes

I'll ask the moon to guide you in the darkness..

I'll ask the sun to warm you till the last inch of your body..

I'll ask the stars to watch over you at night & the angels at day..

I'll ask the the trees to shade you where ever you go..

-BUT- if you think it's not enough, just enter my heart & you'll have all the shade you need..

As for you my darling, I'll ask nothing from you but your LOVE..!!

How can u ask me that when its impossible
I cant give u that cause its not with me
Do u know why???

cause U R Love! so how can I give u ur self!?

heheheh

take it easy Just came up to me to write the above!
Ur piece above inspired me!

I liked what u wrote! and I assume that u r talented!

keep em coming G!

:blush: Thanks Loads..hehe.. i will dnt u worry thuggy..!! :color:

Not bad, XLNC.

Show us some more :)

quite a nice attempt.. you have a style going on there...:) keep it up..and looking forward to read more of your poems..

I actually encourage people who write down their feelings even if they think it is not poem or poetry .

The idea of noting down what or how you feel is a ladder to become a good poet so Her XLNC keep on writting .

No one was born walking we learned it day by day :)

hmmm keep up the good job!:D n yeh i think ur talented too :P

alaaaa...now u think im talented haaaa...tao il nass 7abiiiiiibti...:P hehehe....thx anyway....maraa 3a6atini POLISH...rasi kabr '7alaaaaaaa9...lolz :gap:

Hmmmmmm...interesting
Not bad....keep it up!!:p