Okay, since Xpress and some others asked me to open a new thread with my poems, I thought it was a good idea, and here it is

I'll post some poems later. until then, take care.

Cerulean

Happy that you decided to open our own thread Cerulean, as your poems are for sure standing out and should not go unoticed.

Each poems you wrote so far are so beautifully expressing, through your unique style, feelings or events some of us probably experienced in the past too.

It will not hurt to read again what you posted in the Different Human Feelings Thread (http://www.englishsabla.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=1480&perpage=40&pagenumber=10). Here is to start:

Originally posted by Cerulean


Leaving You

This is the end, I’m sorry to say
I’m not the type of girl you can play
Maybe It took me a long time to realize
If you think I’m joking, then look into my eyes
Nothing but hatred will you see
From now on there’s no you and me
You think I’ll wait until you’ll leave me alone
The anger inside me has reached to the bone
I’m not your girl anymore
You weren’t the guy I was looking for
You treated me badly and called me names
I’m sick and tired of playing your games
But boy when I’m gone
And you’re all alone
You’ll feel an empty space
That no one can replace
You’ll come again
And talk about your pain
But this time I’m not coming back with you
We’re no longer one, we’ll always be two
So pray to god for strength to live
For the love you want, I will not give
I’ve had enough of being mistreated
Being abused and continuously cheated
I’m going to find a life of my own
I hate to break it to you – but your all alone

Credit Cards Don't Work

Flowers, cards, teddies
All the other stuff you get
In the end I want your love
So don’t you ever forget

I don’t want you spending
To show me how much you care
That isn’t the way it works boy
I’m sorry, but I can no longer bear

Instead of buying me gifts
Show me a little consideration
Then you wont have to complain
About my lack of appreciation

Excuse me, if you haven’t noticed
My heart is aching for your touch
I don’t want you leaving
Boy I love you so much

You need to be there for me
And show me your affection
I need to see love in your eyes
Not just my reflection

You can’t express your feelings
By using your credit card
If it was so, it’d be easy
But its not, so its hard

Shower me with compliments
Give me a hug or two
Your money aint buying no love
For all I want is you

How Big Everything Seems

I remember my first day at school
The teacher welcomed me with a smile
All the other little girls stared at me
Regaining my confidence only took a while

I thought life was all about fun and happiness
I never knew there were bad people around
It was like I was floating up in the air
Then suddenly I just fell and hit the ground

Now everything has changed tremendously
There are so many bad people, and a few good
Its like I was living a dream in reality
Then finally I woke up and understood

It’s just funny the way people are nowadays
Fighting, backstabbing and talking behind your back
Then there’s a whole lot of other things
There’s not one bad thing these people lack

There are many stressful and difficult days
So many, that the good moments are treasured
There are many people who often use you
The number of these people can’t be measured

Sometimes even your friends act weirdly
They just ignore you completely for no reason
True friendship is not common these days
It changes from good to bad, just like the season

Then there are people who are friendly
They know how to get to know your secrets
The moment you’re out of their sight
Your secrets are spread like leaflets

This world is so crazy, that no ones normal
War, war, war – that’s the only word you hear
Sometimes I feel there’ll never be an end
Then other times I feel the end is near

When you think about it, its funny
I mean we’re all from the same person (Adam)
But yet, we fight and argue over things
When hatred increases, goodness will lessen

Why do we have to judge people
By their appearance or religion
Can’t everyone live their own life
And make their own decisions

Everyone is going to leave this world
Nothing on earth is going to go with you
Its all about what you’ve done when you lived
It’s not about if you bought one car or two

So wake up and look at the damage
These people have caused on and on
Try and do something to help
Before the times up and you’re gone

A Perfect Possession

Oh what a perfect possession you were
Like an expensive purse made of real fur
The looks and the amazing personality
Made you something hard to believe in reality
Your eyes were so dark and mysterious
Sometimes joyful, yet other times serious
The way you’d expose your teeth with a full smile
And your eyes would mesmerize me for a while
The things you said were so romantic and sweet
And the way you dressed was trendy, yet neat
Your smell was something I could not mistake
And the red roses you would usually take
Everything you did was always right
A dinner and walk under the moonlight
You never ever did anything wrong
That’s why my feeling were more than just strong
The way you kissed was unbelievable
And your touch was always sensational
Then finally the day came
When I got the worst pain
That was when I really did feel
That it was a dream – nothing real

;) simply nice Cerulean

An Incident Obsession

The first time I laid my eyes on you
I knew you where the one, I knew
I never believed in love at first sight
But now I know it was always right
The way you entered the pub that day
My lips froze, I didn’t know what to say
I stared at your calm tanned face
Thank god I was in that place
My pulse raced, as I stood and gazed
When you noticed me, you looked dazed
I blushed, as my heart started to beat fast
I prayed to god for that moment to last
You approached me with a dazzling smile
I wanted to move, but I couldn’t for a while
The scent of your cologne filled my nose
Then fear filled me, what if it was just a pose?
I shook the idea out of my head
And focused my thoughts on him instead
His face finally came to mine
Oh, his face was so divine
I felt his heat all around
In the pub there was no sound
Except that of my racing heart
Telling me that it was just the start
I didn’t talk, neither did he
I really wanted him to kiss me
We didn’t need to speak, our eyes were enough
All along I knew it was real love, not a buff
The incident obsession ended with a kiss
Something I will always remember and miss

Promises

Don’t promise me you’ll be near
And then leave me out of fear
Don’t promise me you’ll love me forever
And forget me when you see another
Don’t promise me you’ll walk by my side
And then when problems arrive, you hide
Don’t promise me you’ll hug me every night
If I’m gonna wake up one morning to find you out of sight
Don’t promise me you love me more than the sun
And then decide after years that I’m not “the one”
Don’t promise me you’ll be there during good and bad
If you’re going to leave me when I’m confused or mad
Don’t promise me you’ll hold my hand
If you’ll leave me for another brand
Don’t promise to listen to me everyday
If you’re going to leave, anyway
Don’t say “I’m the one and only”
If you just wanna play with me
Don’t whisper love words in my ear
And tell me later, I’m no longer dear
Don’t promise we’ll have kids and a home
If you’re going to fall for the first girl from Rome
Don’t promise me, unless you’re sure
If you break my heart, there is no cure

**** those eyes

Don’t look at me
I don’t wanna see
Those very eyes
If you fail to realize
That I loved you
And trusted you too

Those dark brown eyes
Will always mesmerize
Me, even in my dreams
There always seems
That fleck of brown
That makes my heart drown
In the emotions I hate
Boy, you aren’t my fate

Every time I look at you
My old feelings renew
I remember that kiss
And I really start to miss
The times we spent together
They were supposed to last forever
But you treated me wrong
And I’m not going to play along

But they remind me again and again
Of all of the happiness and pain
The warmth in them is not real
But I can’t really help but feel
That I’ve never stopped loving you
And that you love me dearly too

Boy, please don’t ever stare
I don’t want my heart to flare
I don’t want to remember
What happened that December
When you said we’d stay
Together, every single day
But you were playing around
It wasn’t “love” that I found
It was pure hate and evil
From within the very devil

Don’t look at me no more
Our love is over for sure
So I’ll find myself some new
You’re someone I never knew
You tricked me with those eyes
Such a shame, I didn’t realize

In My Dreams

We’re together in some land
Walking slowly hand in hand
The smile on your lips is fresh
You’re there in bones and flesh

That’s what its like in my dreams
Nothing is like it truly seems
In reality you belong to her
I’m just some other dreamer

You two seem so happy and glad
Because of all the sweet times you had
You kiss her lips, and its so fine
But in my dream those lips are mine
I enjoy the warmth and love
Like it was sent to me from above

Why can’t I have you in reality?
Dreams are my only specialty
When it comes to the real world
Everything is really absurd

I wish you were mine, forever
I wish we could be together
If I can’t have you, then I’ll wait
Until I dream in the night, so late

Cerulean ,

Make sure you copyright your poems ...

Nice poems ..

Do you write in here or you got your own poems written in a book where all poems that you write are in the magic book.

I am simply speechless and I can't believe how well you write Cerulean!!!!!. Mashallah you are extremely gifted and one poem is as great as the other and it is difficult for me to even make a pick.

Cerulean, please tell at what age did you start writing as you seem to possess very well this skill? Tell us what inspires you when you write? Do you need to be in a certain mood or remember something you once lived, or does it just comes naturally without string attached?

I believe you should collect all your poems and seriously think of making a small book for sell.

These are among my favorite verses:

Credit Cards Don't Work
Originally posted by Cerulean
...
You need to be there for me
And show me your affection
I need to see love in your eyes
Not just my reflection
...


How Big Everything Seems

...
They know how to get to know your secrets
The moment you’re out of their sight
Your secrets are spread like leaflets
...


The following two poems are among my favorites:

A Perfect Possession

...
The things you said were so romantic and sweet
And the way you dressed was trendy, yet neat
Your smell was something I could not mistake
And the red roses you would usually take
Everything you did was always right
A dinner and walk under the moonlight
...


An Incident Obsession

...
The first time I laid my eyes on you
I knew you where the one, I knew
I never believed in love at first sight
But now I know it was always right
The way you entered the pub that day
My lips froze, I didn’t know what to say
...
I blushed, as my heart started to beat fast
I prayed to god for that moment to last
....
The scent of your cologne filled my nose
Then fear filled me, what if it was just a pose?
...
In the pub there was no sound
Except that of my racing heart
Telling me that it was just the start
...


Cerulean, beside my questions in my previous post, I want to know if english is your first or second language? The verses match perfectly and the choice of words shows that you are very much at ease with a rich and detailed vocabulary.

errr.. second :D

I'll take that as a compliment. Thanx X-Press :p

Cerulean, please tell at what age did you start writing as you seem to possess very well this skill? Tell us what inspires you when you write? Do you need to be in a certain mood or remember something you once lived, or does it just comes naturally without string attached?

I just started writing about 5 months ago, i guess. Nothing really inspires me, i just write. Sometimes though, Im inspired .. like the one about my friend, and the one about how big everything seems. Example, I've never been in love or anything, yet i write things based on my imagination. I dont know where i get this "skill" as you call it :confused: , I just write it down .. sometimes it takes me 5 mins!! I just write when i feel like writing and when i do, it ends up the way it is!

I might publish a book sometime. By the way, I wrote a story too, but i didnt' finish it.


Dark project I just write them while I'm online.. I dont like writing in books, it just doesn't suit me
:lost:

Originally posted by Cerulean
...I've never been in love or anything, yet i write things based on my imagination.

I just write them while I'm online..

I find this even more amazing as you really describe exactly the emotions or feelings of love, longing, disappointment, fear..ect...someone might experience in life. The behaviours as well as the context in which your 'story' is described are so real. Wandering how you will write the day you fall really in love...which I hope will be soon ;)

Waiting to read more your beautiful verses.

Thanx Xpress. ;)

I'll post some more poems later.

Some really nice ones, Cer mashallah!!

I loved Credit Cards Don't Work :)


I think that your poem would be great if used as song lyrics ;)

Yeah. You could sing it Phoey... how about an RnB song?! :D

Cerulean, great poems.

Keep up the good work.

Why don't you make them into songs?

Where Did It Go Wrong?

Our relationship was just like a fairy tale
I thought the thing between us would never fail
We were meant to be in every single way
We were perfect, inseparable, until today
Oh, dear, where did to go wrong?
I thought you would love me all along
What did I do that made you disappear?
I can’t bear it when you’re not near
With your warmth gone, I feel so cold
Memories of yesterday seem so old
I just want to know if I was the reason
Or did you change just like the season?
You were the only one who believed in me
You saw my deeper side, the one others didn’t see
You were always there when I needed someone
You’d take away the loneliness, you were so much fun
I miss you so much, why did you leave me, why?
If I’m going to live without you, then I might as well die
After all, you gave me something no one else did
Your love, so precious, then you ran away and hid
My love, tell me you don’t love me any more
Don’t leave me alone, confused and unsure
I can’t bear life without you, I’m so miserable and sad
Remember how happy we were together, and how glad
I just want to know why you went away
And the love I have for you, will always stay

Memories of the Past

Things have changed so much, and so have I
But I keep seeing us together, I don’t know why
I know its over, and we’re going in different ways
Even though, I keep on remembering our days
The days we spent together, happily
I really thought we’d have a family
But its too bad that we didn’t last
And now I get memories of the past
Running clearly through my head
When I wake up, and when I go to bed
Its driving me insane.. why can’t I forget
The moments we spent together, and not regret
The fact that we’re not longer one, but two
And that our love has ended too
Or has it not ended, yet?
Remember the day when we first met
I thought it was meant to be
I thought we’d be together, you and me
But now everything’s over, and so is our love
I should stop getting these memories from above
I can’t seem to stop my self from wondering why
I keep getting these memories of you and I

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Originally posted by SweetEyez
Cerulean, great poems.

Keep up the good work.

Why don't you make them into songs?

Hmmm ur the second one who asks me this question.
Well, If anyone wants to sing it out, then they're most welcome! Of course, they have to ask me first. I can't switch on the FM and listen to my poem being yelled out in a rock song..

*sigh*

Maybe someday I'll sing 'em out with Phoenix.. since she likes the idea too. :D

WOW. umm..i rarely pop in here to read the poems but i was curious to see what u were capable of..and i am speachless. all those poems were brillian..and very well written..mashallah.

u should have them published or something.

well done..and keep em commin. :)

ehmmm.. now will you reconsider setting me up with Elton..:D

Confused

I’m really sorry, but this has to end
Are you my lover or just a friend?
I’m sick of playing this silly game
The way you act is pretty lame
I want to know what’s going on, or ill go
You’re playing with my emotions like a yo-yo
You lure me with your charm and wit
But you’ve gotta fill me in, otherwise I’ll quit

First, we laugh around, and chat
We speak about this and that
You tell me I can trust you
And tell you my secrets too
Then suddenly, you say you love me
This is confusing me cant you see?

My emotions build up, and I think I’m in love
Then, my bubble bursts and I fall from above
You’re back to treating me like your mate
You better tell me what’s going on, before its late
Otherwise you’ll lose both: a friend and a lover
I think I like you boy, and it’s something I can’t cover
So tell me what I really mean to you and why
I want the whole truth, all of it, no lie

I can’t wait any longer
My emotions are becoming stronger
So, please, make it crystal clear
When you’re done, you’ll find me here

:app: this is excellent
you have written this very well
i enjoyed this alot!
Its a good poem! keep up the creative thought!!

Originally posted by Cerulean

Maybe someday I'll sing 'em out with Phoenix.. since she likes the idea too. :D


lol. yeah! You can be the songwriter and I'll be the singer. :D

j/k. I have a terrible croaky voice. :weep:






I like the latest one "Confused". Show us more! :)

mashallah...really some nice peoms you got here....very impressive.... keep it up..looking forward to read more...

THanks all of you :blush:

And Phoenix you dont have a croaky voice!! ;)
I'll write some more poems later.
until then, ciao.

Cerulean,

What can I say.. Simply beautiful poems you posted .
I have a question for you or a suggestion .Why dont you try and write a philosophical poem about life and love , lets see how your immagination flows .
Do not get me wrong I love your poems but I think you can give more and you can express your inner soul.
Or as Thug4life syas nature is one of his tools and inner feelings which thrives him to write and express .

Sure,
I think that would be a change. :)
I'll post it later.

where are you Cerulean :confused: ???!!!!
Dp is looking for more of ur poems to be pop up here :)

Sorry, I was away for a while. In dubai, having fun. ;)
Now, since am back, I'll try writing this "new" type of poetry soon.

i really liked ur poems ur gifted
i really liked (How Big Everything Seems)
its soo true
keep it up

I really liked your poems, I used to write myself but I stopped now. The one that I really liked was Where Did it Go Wrong. Keep up the good work.
Can I post some of my poems or this thread is special for Cerulean? Although they are not as good as the ones she wrote of course.

Wow !!
all what i can say is mashallah Cerulean Keep it up girl :app:

hey cerulean,, where's the rest of ur wonderful work?
Looking foward to reading some more of ur amazing work!

And I would just want to let u guys know that Cerulean is not just Extremely amazing in her writtings but she is also a wonderful in her drawings as well. She is so talented mshallah 3alaiha ...

Thanks everyone. :blush:

Homie thanx. Ur an amazing person. :D
Blood Rose U can post ur stuff in the other thread I opened now.

Okay, I guess this nature thingy needs a little working on. This is the shortest poem I've ever written - ahem. :sweat:

Mother Nature

Mother nature, so beautiful and pure
Watching us as we walk about, unsure
We stand upon her very skin
Holding our strong feelings within
The feelings that fill us with delight
Oh she is such a beautiful sight
We sail over her naked blue eyes
Discovering wonders, every shape and size
The warmth of her body keeps us secure
There is no person that she fails to allure
We admire her, she’s strong, she’ll never fall
But we are part of her beauty, after all

-- -- -- -- --

I'm not sure of what I think about this one really. Anyway, I'm gonna write some more of my "usual" poems.
:lost:

Bliss

This is the first time I feel like this
So this is what they mean by “bliss”?
I’m so unsure of myself when you’re around
My heart starts racing when I hear your sound
I never used to be like this boy. Never.
I feel like it’s going to last forever
There’s only one thing that’s missing here
I need to know how you feel when I’m near
Boy you’ve got it all, that’s all I can say
All I need is you, then everything will be okay
They say looks can be deceiving. I can’t help but stare.
I’m seeing these images of both of us, everywhere
Whenever I hear a love song, I think of you
I know its so sad, but boy its true
I can’t help but stare at your handsome face
Looks can be deceiving, but this is a different case
I think its time to stop searching for Mr. Right
You’re definitely the one, you’re an incredible sight
Baby, I want you so much
Can’t wait to feel your touch
Until then, tell me how you feel about me
Then we can see where it leads to. We’ll see.

:app: We miss these quality poems good to se you back and lets hear more of your poems .
I Liked the Mother Nature poem more ...

Good job and well done

Yep. Soon inshallah. Am just kind of busy at the moment. :)

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I truely miss your wanderful poems Cerulean as they are so real and so true.

Though it is nice to explore other horizon, I have a strong feeling that you are really talented when it comes to describe broken relationships, love and human feelings.

I really like the following verses you wrote:

Where Did It Go Wrong?

"With your warmth gone, I feel so cold
Memories of yesterday seem so old
I just want to know if I was the reason
Or did you change just like the season?"

Memories of the Past

"But now everything’s over, and so is our love
I should stop getting these memories from above
I can’t seem to stop my self from wondering why
I keep getting these memories of you and I"

Confused

"My emotions build up, and I think I’m in love
Then, my bubble bursts and I fall from above
You’re back to treating me like your mate
You better tell me what’s going on, before its late"

These poems are written by an Author who didn't got the credit for its work!

In other words Cerulean is a Fake! :sad:


On the requests of the members I can produce the original Artist who's work has been used in Partly or Entirely!

MusicMan this is my own work. Homeless, and some others, have seen me writing poems infront of their very eyes. Just because you're not talented doesn't mean others aren't. :rolleyes:

Okay, If you're so smart, go get me the names of the so-called authors. :mad:

Unwanted

Feeling cold and lonely
Missing your tender touch
Feeling used and worthless
God it hurts so much

Why did you leave me?
You said you'd stay
You left without any warning
Like everything would be okay

Can't take it any more
I'll never stop loving you
My heart wont listen to me
This means my love is true

I feel so unwanted
So full of emptiness inside
I'm living a nightmare
without you by my side

I've tried to get over it
But every time my feelings renew
No matter how much I try to forget
Something reminds me of you

I call you in the middle of the night
Just to hear you say "hello"
It reminds me of the old days
I thought it'd last forever, I didn't know

It's over, It's over
You'll never be mine
My life is useless
I'll never be fine






There u go Mr MusicMan :gap:

Originally posted by MusicMan
These poems are written by an Author who didn't got the credit for its work!

In other words Cerulean is a Fake! :sad:


On the requests of the members I can produce the original Artist who's work has been used in Partly or Entirely!

:duh: What are u talkin about? You can't just say that where ever you want... Why don't u show us the AUTHORS? :duh:

MusicMan, r u completey aware that we all know that u r just making this up?! I dont get the reason though,,, r u just jelouse or ur just a very 7aqood human being?!

oh welll Just for ur information , ive personally seen and been with cerulean while she has written some of her work so instead of making up stories and telling lies which u dont even have proove to u should say mashallah ok?
What r u gonna tell us next? that u wrote these poems?!?! :haha:

Originally posted by Homeless
MusicMan, r u completey aware that we all know that u r just making this up?! I dont get the reason though,,, r u just jelouse or ur just a very 7aqood human being?!

oh welll Just for ur information , ive personally seen and been with cerulean while she has written some of her work so instead of making up stories and telling lies which u dont even have proove to u should say mashallah ok?
What r u gonna tell us next? that u wrote these poems?!?! :haha:

Why are you even wasting ur time with him? You don't have to explain it to him, coz he probably won't understand.. :gap:

I have a Job that Involves Art and Artists.

Each and every Genuine Artist has a Taste!

For Example:

An artist JOHN who is a Sad person so all his poems are SAD and Depressed!

And whenever we see a poem that has that peculiar line that shows the sadness so we immediatly know it can only be JOHN!

No artists have Extreme's!

The poems of Ceruleon or which she falsely claims are all different in way of Expression, thought and feeling!

So we can know that it's all different person.

I hope that I am Clear!

Cerulean pls respect urself by respecting the Intellectual property of others!

Originally posted by MusicMan
I have a Job that Involves Art and Artists.

Each and every Genuine Artist has a Taste!

For Example:

An artist JOHN who is a Sad person so all his poems are SAD and Depressed!

And whenever we see a poem that has that peculiar line that shows the sadness so we immediatly know it can only be JOHN!

No artists have Extreme's!

The poems of Ceruleon or which she falsely claims are all different in way of Expression, thought and feeling!

So we can know that it's all different person.

I hope that I am Clear!

Cerulean pls respect urself by respecting the Intellectual property of others!

HuH?? What property of others? What the hell are you talkin about? You donno **** about poems, so you come into this thread and try to spoil it? You have no proof that she took those poems from anybody...
And just because JOHN wrote a sad poem, that doesn't mean that no one in this world can write sad poems...

What the hell is wrong with you?

Atlease she respects herself more than you do... If you're not sure about it just leave everybody alone with THEIR work...

:fire: :duh: :fire: :duh:

Originally posted by MusicMan
I have a Job that Involves Art and Artists.

Each and every Genuine Artist has a Taste!

For Example:

An artist JOHN who is a Sad person so all his poems are SAD and Depressed!

And whenever we see a poem that has that peculiar line that shows the sadness so we immediatly know it can only be JOHN!

No artists have Extreme's!

The poems of Ceruleon or which she falsely claims are all different in way of Expression, thought and feeling!

So we can know that it's all different person.

I hope that I am Clear!

Cerulean pls respect urself by respecting the Intellectual property of others!

Says who?!
Peoples feelings change every now and then, and they can express them. Personally, I've never heard of a person who stays sad all of his life, and writes sad poems.

Besides, I dont write poems about how I feel, but instead about other people, and what they go through.

These poems are all mine - period.

I'm not afraid of you, and I would never steal peoples work. God knows that, and that's more than enough. I dont have to proove anything to you. :rolleyes:

I wish for Nabhan or the super mod to delete all the posts above up to Cerulean's last poem. All this non-sense is really spoiling this wanderful thread...I guess this was MuscicMan's purpose, but it doesn't mean that this can't be fixed ;)

Cerulean, why don't you ignore his jalousy and bad intentions, and keep posting your beautiful verses for us to read? :color:

Originally posted by X-press
I wish for Nabhan or the super mod to delete all the posts above up to Cerulean's last poem. All this non-sense is really spoiling this wanderful thread...I guess this was MuscicMan's purpose, but it doesn't mean that this can't be fixed ;)

Cerulean, why don't you ignore his jalousy and bad intentions, and keep posting your beautiful verses for us to read? :color:

Thanx, X-press :D

Failed

I’m really sorry I failed you boy
Treated you just like a toy
Didn’t see the true love we had
I’ve finally realized what I did was bad

You won’t speak to me anymore
I don’t mean anything to you, for sure
I’m just some other person who hurt you
I thought love was a game, but it was true

Can’t undo my mistakes, It’s late
I guess this is it, this is our fate
I’ll never be loved again
I know I deserve all this pain

Now that you're gone

All those moments we spent
All those jokes you told
All those days filled with joy
Now that you’re gone, It feels so old

You opened my eyes to the beauty of life
Taught me how it was nothing but happiness
Gave me your shoulder to cry on
Now that you’re gone, I’m filled with loneliness

My eyes are swelling with tears
My world is so empty without you here
Can’t look forward to the next day
Now that you’re gone, you’re not near

The sound of laughter, is but a memory
Dark shadows fill my boring day
I’ll miss you forever and ever
Now that you’re gone, now that you’re away

Originally posted by Cerulean
Now that you're gone

All those moments we spent
All those jokes you told
All those days filled with joy
Now that you’re gone, It feels so old

You opened my eyes to the beauty of life
Taught me how it was nothing but happiness
Gave me your shoulder to cry on
Now that you’re gone, I’m filled with loneliness

My eyes are swelling with tears
My world is so empty without you here
Can’t look forward to the next day
Now that you’re gone, you’re not near

The sound of laughter, is but a memory
Dark shadows fill my boring day
I’ll miss you forever and ever
Now that you’re gone, now that you’re away

I love the idea... And ofcourse, I think that the last part was the best:

The sound of laughter, is but a memory
Dark shadows fill my boring day
I’ll miss you forever and ever
Now that you’re gone, now that you’re away

I guess that the reason is the Dark Shadows part, it makes sense that whenever someone had a boring day, that someone just feels darkness all around him...

Thanks for sharing them :)

Poignant

Lost in my very own world
A world of sadness and misery
Lost in my own thoughts
Where nothing resembles reality

Breathless, broken and defeated
In my mouth I taste my bitter tears
My lips frozen, unable to express
The feelings that they’ve held for years

I feel like screaming out loud
To show them what I’m going through
They can’t understand what we had
The love and dedication, me and you

Can’t hold the pain inside any longer
My heart is weak, and so am I
They say you aren’t worth it
But I know you are, that’s why I cry

I don’t feel like explaining anything
I know in the end they’ll never understand
You see, you and I, we’re different
Our actions aren’t understood in their land

They watch me with curiousity
I stare back in silence and gloominess
Can’t take it anymore, I really can’t
Without you, there’s no happiness

Very happy to see more poems of you Cerulean and again mashallah you are very talented!

My favorites verses you wrote are:

In my mouth I taste my bitter tears
My lips frozen, unable to express
The feelings that they’ve held for years
....

I know in the end they’ll never understand
You see, you and I, we’re different
Our actions aren’t understood in their land

Tell us Cerulean, what do you need to be inspired? Did you necessarily have to experience what you express in your poems, or is this just a creation of your great imagination?

Thanx Xpresso
:blush:

I've been feeling sad and blue. I guess that says it all. :sorry:

Please don't feel sad Cerulean and don't let anyone get into your way. You have a lots of talents and your posts are admired by most of us. As we say: at the end of the rainbow, there is always a sunshine :color:

This is for you (click here) (http://www.englishsabla.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=229566#post229566)

Aww Xpress, that was very sweet of you. :blush:

I have been looking everywhere for you Cerulean ;) Even if you feel sad you could write your fantastic poems lets hear more .

Originally posted by Cerulean
errr.. second :D

I'll take that as a compliment. Thanx X-Press :p



I just started writing about 5 months ago, i guess. Nothing really inspires me, i just write. Sometimes though, Im inspired .. like the one about my friend, and the one about how big everything seems. Example, I've never been in love or anything, yet i write things based on my imagination. I dont know where i get this "skill" as you call it :confused: , I just write it down .. sometimes it takes me 5 mins!! I just write when i feel like writing and when i do, it ends up the way it is!

I might publish a book sometime. By the way, I wrote a story too, but i didnt' finish it.


Dark project I just write them while I'm online.. I dont like writing in books, it just doesn't suit me
:lost:



Hey ! :yikes: I am .... reading your poems !! You write just fine and soft.. Romantic and ...

Impressive dear


Best Regards:app:

Thanx man. :gap:

It has been several days you haven't post anything Cerulean. I miss your poems and can't wait to read the next one...

Yours Truly

I promise you my dear
I'll stay with you forever
We'll grow old side by side
I'll never leave you, never

When things go bad
I'll kiss away the pain
You're the only one
Who's love I seek to gain

I was born to love you
To offer you my affection
You were born for me too
You offer me love and protection

You're my one and only
Thank god he sent you
For how can one live
Without the love I receive from you

You're my prince, My hero
My first and last desire
You fill my heart with love
You turn my senses on fire

Can't act to be indifferent
Even when people are around
I love you darling, you're my everything
I turn breathless when I hear ur sound

They Can't Stop Us

Ever since we met, my darling
People have been warning me
They say "He's not worth it"
They say "It's not meant to be"

Let them say what they say
I know they're filled with jealousy
They can't understand our love
It's too complicated for 'em to see

My dear, you and I are one
They're jealous, they cant stand it
They're trying to divide us
But you and I will never split

They can't stop us dear
Our love is true and strong
If they think they'll succeed
Then I'm telling 'em they're wrong

How come I didn't read all this earliar?

....

Why are almost all your poems related to sadness or trying to get close to your loved one, amidst all the havoc around?

Was that your true feeling, or you just write up?

ps/ Too many questions? ;)

Thanx Shino... :blush:

Well, I honestly haven't been through most of what I write about. Sometimes I'm inspired.. especially when I see what other people go through. When I feel like writing poems.. Love or hate comes to my mind. I dunno why! Its just the way I am, I guess...

But some of 'em are kinda true.. like Now that ur gone. About someone who was really close to me. No love or anything. Sometimes I just add stuff.. to make it more interesting.

Anyway, Ciao for now.
Cer

I find it amazing Cerulean that you can write so beautifully and realistically so many deep and sad emotions without in fact having experienced them. I believe this show that your are really talented :)

I particularly like your last poem and was wandering if you share any of your verses with members of your family or do you simply keep them here?

I simply keep them here, but hommie and nixy see 'em...
I dont share my poems... for some reason:lost:

Well, there are a couple of 'em I took to school. Just a couple. I wrote one about a teacher.. it was really funny :haha:, they stuck it up on the wall. That's it, I guess.

I dont write many poems nowadays, cuz am busy most of the time. :(

I've really been neglecting this place - as I've been quite busy. Anyway, here's one I wrote now.. (not that good, but It'll do for the moment :rolleyes: )

My Love And I

We are one and will always be
Nothing can destroy us - u and me
My love, you are the greatest gift
Away from your love I'll never drift
I stare in your eyes, day and night
They're so amazing, a very rare sight
I want to describe my love for you
But no matter what I say, It'll never do
For no words can express what I feel
You and I both know its nothing but real
God sent you - my angel - so we could be
The perfect couple -darling - ever in reality
Our love is as sweet as a growing rose
A beautiful sight from far, as well as close
I love you dear, I'm in love with you
I dont need to prove it, you know it's true

Originally posted by Cerulean
I've really been neglecting this place - as I've been quite busy. Anyway, here's one I wrote now.. (not that good, but It'll do for the moment :rolleyes: )

My Love And I

We are one and will always be
Nothing can destroy us - u and me
My love, you are the greatest gift
Away from your love I'll never drift
I stare in your eyes, day and night
They're so amazing, a very rare sight
I want to describe my love for you
But no matter what I say, It'll never do
For no words can express what I feel
You and I both know its nothing but real
God sent you - my angel - so we could be
The perfect couple -darling - ever in reality
Our love is as sweet as a growing rose
A beautiful sight from far, as well as close
I love you dear, I'm in love with you
I dont need to prove it, you know it's true

amazing poem and rest of the poems....are u sure you dont get paid for this?? :)

you know what the syle you have written this poem reminds me so much of my own style...i mean the phrasing and the words that sound together...if you check my website again and see the poem "the soldier" you'll understand what i mean.

by the way which style do you prefer the best? and which one is the least prefered style for you?

Hey Abs,

Thanx :blush:

Yeah, I checked out your poems.. all of 'em actually. Very talented. Yeah I know what you mean about the style... This is how I used to write my poems in the beginning.. Then I started writing every four verses in a paragraph, which looks better!
I guess if I had to choose one of 'em.. it'd be the four verses- a paragraph one, cuz it's much easier to write. Whereas in the other one *like yours*, I've gotta find a rhyming word for each two verses. Ahh well, all in all... I enjoy writing 'em. :D