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juneboy55
09-07-03, 06:58 PM
Letter to Mom


Early one morning while she was asleep,
She received a bloody letter, address incomplete,
It read dear Mother or Guardian of Mine,
I truly hope these words find you in time,

I had wished you could raise me and give me a home,
Never thought Id be hated or left alone,
We could have been friends and shared unconditional love,
But sadly I wasnt the one you thougt of,

He was always number one more important than me,
He never had children so he wasnt my daddy,
No matter how hard I try he always comes first,
You never seem to care or see how much it hurts,

Do you even bother? to check up on me at school?
Do you even care if Im following the rules?
Do you know how many guys have played me for a fool?
And left me crying with tears enough for a pool?

But that doesnt really matter now, not anymore,
Arent you glad I wont grow up to be a w*ore?
Its okay mom you have the greatest releif,
Now I couldnt possibly cause any grief,

Dont worry mom, you never cared anyways,
And if you did you never showed it in anyway,
No matter what I did he always was before me,
And now that Im gone you can completely now forget about me,

I see you have your old life back,
Now live it while you can,
Youre one step from having a family,
You already have your man,

Tell my babygirl im sorry for leaving so soon,
That whenever she misses me to look at the moon,
And that no matter what happened Ill always love her,
And that I didnt do anything of this because of her,

Tell my grandma I thank her for always welcoming my arms,
And for always trying to keep me from harm,
Tell my friends that I wont forget them ever,
That when the time is right well be together,

Remember me when it storms and rains,
Remember this moment when I sliced my veins,
Remember my spirit and remember me,
And remember the love that you never gave me,

All the feelings you showed me,
Are all the feelings maintained,
All you ever gave me,
Was anger and pain,


By-juneboy


(please comment)

Thug4Life
10-07-03, 03:07 AM
heheheh well why do i have the feeling that this is very related to eminem and 2 pac style!!!

MAaaan do u mean every word in that letter? Just curious to know!!!!

any ways
its cool as a poem and it does rhyme indeed!

X-press
10-07-03, 03:37 AM
Nice Juneboy and it seems more a poem than a letter. I agree with Thugy, when reading it we would think we are reading Eminem song. The style as well as the content is extremely similar.

What inspired Juneboy to write these sentences and wandering like Thug if you really meant what you said here?

sad_dreamer
10-07-03, 03:42 AM
its fabulous ..I hope you are not inspired by ur own mom :lost:

Enigma
10-07-03, 03:47 AM
No no no....... not eminem style. Had it been so you would have seen the F word in every other sentence. :duh:

But dang that's good Juneboy. ;)

I just wanna know, do you base your poems on personal experiences?

juneboy55
13-07-03, 04:22 PM
runnin' around
yes all my poems are base on life and my personal experiences.


Hay sad_dreamer
Everybody shoed inspires with he’s mother

Thug 4life
I don’t go with eminem and 2 pac style bat anyway thinks for sharing with me


thinks 2 all for you



A Sun Inevitable Fears
====
This will merely happen
Once you've gone away
The pain will continue overlapping
Into each and every day

A unimaginable state
I will not be able to bare
A tragic and turmoil-filled fate
Followed with tormenting despair

Oh my only mother
Please stay with me in heart always
Your leave from here is not much further
Perhaps maybe even just days

I will stand tall and then truly fall
No longer able to rub your hands with lotion
Feeling it all
Just, only in slow motion

Crying on your shoulders
Laying next to you at night
As it gets colder
And my heart is filled with fright

Even the short, yet memorable walks
I will never forget them
And all the deep heart to heart talks
About him

Him, yes dad will miss you as well
All of our tears will come down
God, in my soul it will be hell

One of a kind
To all of us
As a mother is to her child
But I promise you, you don't have to rush
I would love for you to stay for a while

Because I love you mom
And I will miss you more than my life itself
And I will never put your memory on a shelf


(In dedication to living in my heart always.. mother; from your sun,)
By-juenboy

juneboy55
13-07-03, 04:56 PM
I am a 21 year old single mother and acouple of years my mother had a serious condition that caused her to lose alot of the memory and caused her to be unable to perform daily functions on her own. She was placed in a nursing home because I was too young to take the responsibility on my own.
I am currently working to get a house so I can take care of her by my self.
This poem is dedicated to you mom.
I Love You Girl

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A Letter To My Mother !!!!!!!!!

As I sit here remembering the times we shared together,
The good the bad and also the laughter,
I keep thinking mom, trying to figure it out,
But my thoughts only lead me to the same question how?

Some people don't appreciate what they have until its gone,
It took me awhile mom, sorry it took so long,
I keep wondering if God would have changed his plans,
If I'd just walked with you hand in hand,

Without you mom things just aren't the same,
So I am asking you mother do I deserve this much pain?
When will it be over will it ever disappear?
Will you ever be able to understand in my heart I really care?

So now mom I have made my confessions,
Surely by now I have learned my lesson,
I feel as if I can't go on without you,
And I know you feel the same way too,

Ever since the day you left me I learned to take care of self,
But, I always feel like I need your help,
We missed so much in those dreary years,
But now we can forget all those fears,

Because I know in my heart soon we'll be together,
And then we will talk and talk and again there will be laughter,
God, I can't wait I've got so much to say,
Since I've waited so long for that special day,

So sleep mother and dream, dream of me,
I love you and I know you love me.

by-juneboy