This was the first thing I wrote on my own on June 25th 2000



HEART BREAKER

I hate what u did to me,and I alwayz cry
You knew I loved u, so I wonder why

Why do u keep on breaking my heart?
Why do I go ceazy when we are apart?

When I think of you, I know I can do better.
But even though, that doesnt matter

It's you I love,need and want

I know the truth,and still it hurts
You screw up,make me suffer and all I do is burst

I burst into tears over you and I
For us to be in seperate ways,I'd rather die!

On top of that you still came first
Was I bad to you? Well you were worst!

Why HER? I did everything I could!
I asked if you'd love me forever?! You said u would..

Promise after promise you broke
I thought you'd change, I had slight hope.

You dont deserve my love, Im sure
But yet I still miss you and it makes me feel sore

Life without u is such a mess
Empty,plain, I can feel the stress

Friends tell me you're not worth it
I nod,agree but I know I'm talking $h!t

When I say I dont care and im completly fine
I know i'm lieing to myself and it kills that you're not mine

Forgetting and moving on is worth a try
But it's too soon now, so I still cry

I cry over you and me
I cry because it's you and her I see

All I wanted was for us to be together
I'd take all the pain for us to last forever

We''ve been together for quit awhile
Memories of us just make me smile

I cherished what we had with all my soul
You and I being an US was my Only goal.

You threw it all away like it meant nothing
Even though you let go, to me you're still everything

oh how I wish I could turn back time..
was loving you so much considered a crime?!

It's all over now, but do u care?
Life's a |3!tch, and it's all unfair!


Written by : Homeless

man that's coo00l ..I can imagin it as a rap song :rolleyes:

That was really good. Mashallah.

But you sound so torn apart! :(

now we have a talent over here!
welcome to the Team mate ;) I loved it!

Hey, that ain't bad at all ;)

I think I've read it before though..

Originally posted by Thug4Life
now we have a talent over here!
welcome to the Team mate ;) I loved it!


thank u man!!
that makes me :D

Originally posted by Phoenix

I think I've read it before though..


yah phoenix,iam sure I read it to u before when u were over my house or something :)

i'll be putting in some more of my writtings soon inshallah.

Nice one sara7a..its good to have a hobby such as writing...welldone and keep on writing.

Really nice homy....keep it up!
:D

thx guys :)


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Ooh! as frist thing u r writing by ur own thats is cool. Its the different point of the person that WANTS the other one and all! Thats cool. I liked how you wrote it and express your feelings for the person. Great write and good luck!

this is a great write I can really relate to this!!! I liked it! Keep it up!! :color:

thank u so much for ur comment :)
ínshallah i'll b putting is some more of my work soon
cheers...

I really liked ur poem u should keep it up !!!!

Y don't u show it to some1 tht can do something about it inshallah in the future we'll read all ur peoms and it will be sold everywhere :D :D

thx dear
so sweet of u
allah yisma3 minik inshallah

I wrote something else right now .. it took about 5 mins
I posted it in Human Feelings..
Same Sabla
check it out
it's not all that but it's okay I guess