words can be fearsome if used in the wrong direction,
they can easily be twisted to some forms of misconception,
they take people out of their path and lead them to their wrong direction,
i want to try and use these words to leave your mind in deep confusion,

she picks the flowers off the carpets of green
in the early hours of the rising sun it crowns the feilds with gold
noone around, to this universe she's unseen
she makes no sound since they'r no ears to her melody
her voice so sweet to one, if heard,could bring tears to a feirce army,
no1 can get away, and even if you tried to run, you would return
she would never convince you to stay, but you would wait by her side till your heart began to burn
she was put there, all alone- left to roam, these endless greens
because no1 could live without her, yet they could not live with her,
her heart too pure for this world, she would make all humans shrink and whither
yet she's needed for us to believe, hope lives somewhere on this earth
all we need is to retrieve it, grasp it for all its worth
her innocence remains unchanged as she lives all alone
in this golden time at dawn, she never goes back home
noone says her name, yet they'll never forget her
they know that dame is there, with a wing and a feather
nearly an angel, that can't fly
because noones perfect, the perfect die
she's what everyone would be, if there was no wrong with you and me,
feel sorry for this girl, she'll never know anything in this world- except herself and her identity
in a feild with no ears, tell me the sound of a falling tree?


its sorta deep....i dunno if any1 would understand it
btw dp the one i liked best from u was that short really sweet one abt the mute person....few words but says alot

Mizchikal hmmm I do not what to say Im speechless .. Now that is great work Loved the poem .

Now that you have made me taste your poem you cannot stop here and even if you leave on the 9th you may log in Sabla anywhere and any place .

Stay :)

Your poem inspired me and I wrote this :

Night and day you remind me of the spring
Each moment you make me fly high above
Each second my heart beats calling your name
Each birth of a child brings joy to people
It’s the same feeling I get Just looking at you
Every wedding night when the bride has that smile
I feel that too once Im with you
Every song a bird sings
I send you my love and that special tune
Every rock falls from a stream
Your name I scream
Every wave in the ocean
I hear your name with the wave which sings
Every breeze
I feel you near and you in my heart I squeeze
Every cloud pass’s by I see your name
I know Im insane


MizChikaL Thanks for the compliment ;)

im sittin here and i dont know what to say
what memories should i create in my mind today
i have the power to build a world of nothing in your head
a place you would think about as you lie down in your bed
flightless birds shriek soundless words of misery on your ear
heightless buildings peak clouds made of dream material in your head
think of all the books the stories that were written to be read
all the places on this earth made to be visited
never enough time to do everything in this life
so use the time you have to elevate this life for others
to be remembered by all ppl as the man with many sisters and brothers
everyone from everyone this world should stick together
people never face the real enemy instead they turn against one another
i can't say nomore i never even felt like writing
i got real work to do so now i gotta be leaving

different shades of the same color

the mare running at night so free

so fast so wild i wish that mare was me

taking one step forward

at a time


living day by day keep each day as mine

how i envy that mare living a life so devine

people waste so many hours for themselves they have no time

different shades of the same color

this picture is painted with the color of life

this poem is tainted with a cover on my heart

reality of the truth is that truth is inexistant

the mare is but an image in your mind that you will never find

pain cures the heart of happiness

and your misery it will secure lifes ugliness

Very nice
different shades of the same color

Your poem is good keep on posting MizChikaL :) and lets enjoy reading your poems .

Mashalllaaa Mashalllaaa. Are those your words Mizchi!
you are more than Talented. as well Dp..
I reallly enjoyed reading each and every single word of yours!
I JUST FALL IN LOVE WITH THOSE WORDS:

never enough time to do everything in this life
so use the time you have to elevate this life for others
to be remembered by all ppl as the man with many sisters and brothers


As well this

people waste so many hours for themselves they have no time

different shades of the same color

this picture is painted with the color of life

this poem is tainted with a cover on my heart


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Dp I loved yours as well, specially :

I send you my love and that special tune
Every rock falls from a stream
Your name I scream
Every wave in the ocean


Keep up the goood work people. And do pass by Mizchi your words are so0o0o FAB

thanx.......didnt think it was anything that special tho but YEs they are my words..

im leaving for a month jus wanted 2 say bye, i got a funny feeling i'l be too busy enjoyin the holidayz to come online n write..

peace all
-bye

im back 2 reality
homesick right in the middle of a tragedy
poemz not sposed to be about me but its gotta be
i want to be that horse galloping away
so fast soon it fades out of the picture
a spot on a landscape scene
unheard, unmet,and nearly unseen
reality slapped me in the face n left me standing
lifes made up of days that are just too demanding
im a disgrace to humanity
livin slow pace of a tragedy
im walking on air, as high as i'd dare
words worth their weight in gold, restin in my mind
restless, desprate, waiting to be found
now those words have waited enough, n they left me behind
waiting on a lanscape scene, for someone else to find

MizChikaL all I can say is Mashallah!
You are so good man!
wow ...
Kepp the good work coming

hey thnx
lisn
since ur online now can u help..how do i get the picture under my name?

the devil gave birth to hate n hell
the worldz first step to bein unwell
the angel came to heal the hate
was injured by fire of hell and fate
n people came to save her
but they all came too late

they never understood what they got till they lost it
they wanted to believe what they allready knew
everyday the same story till the many became few
this world wasnt made for me
me n life arent frendz we just wern't meant to be
this road has many bends some end in tradegy
im trying my best to stay out of dangers way
frendz stayin frendz ~to the end ~ till they lose touch
the worlds gr8st sin in your eyes might not seem like much
im scared of my own soul now
im running but i cant hide
darkness in the brightest room
in blindness i feel my way
ahead of me fate does bring doom
fears hightened i dont want to stay
dont end it by takin your own life
dont end it on the blade of a knife
i was just trying to nice and save a soul
i was too late
and for that
myself i hate

go to users cp which on the top of the sabla page
then edit options and reach to the bottom of the page. From there u can either choose an avatar from what they have given u or get ur own but u need to decrease it to the same size as all the other avatar then attatch it!
I hope u got what I mean!

Nice to see you back MizChikaL :)

hey MizChikaL that's the bomb cool stuff you got there keep'em coming i didn't read everything but i'm going to soon
:color:

thnx though i doubt im gonna write anymore here...or if i do it wont be alot..so u got the time to read them

Originally posted by MizChikaL
thnx though i doubt im gonna write anymore here...or if i do it wont be alot..so u got the time to read them ok i will and good luck in your studies

i need luck
itz my only hope:s