Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has its special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friend

Originally posted by laughingrose
Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has its special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friend

I really liked you poem, it's just beautiful and lovely....and for that I'm saying.
YOUR LOVE
You loved him completely as a man
Something no other had ever done
You loved him completely beyond your years
With a devotion not known to him
You loved him completely without restraint
Never slowing to watch and wait
You loved him completely with all your heart
While knowing that one day it would fall apart
But for this he loved your poetic soul
As it kept him alive for over a year
But your heart he knew he’d stole
So he sadly had to give it back
Before he emptied your very soul……

jzzr2000@hotmail.com

Be here in my eyes
So others may see
The beauty and presence of your love
In one who was blind, but now believes.
Be here in my heart
Flow through my blood
Stengthen my soul and wash me clean
A living example of what your grace has done

Be here in my hands
Give me your touch
Use me to comfort and to build
Shelter for those who need your love

Breathe words to my lips
So I may speak
Echo your truth and living words
Allah, make me all that I can be.

May I ask where have you taken this from ?? I guess coping/taking poems from other site is not right. It is illegal. OK

no comments.. it's your right to say if it copied or not I cannot say any thing ..
just try to say thanks..Playboy

hehehe, wajid 3aleesh yumma !

Be careful laughingrose in order not to find yourself behind bars ( JAIL ) taking copies else where.

Mr Khanjar can you leave him/her ALONE PLEASE ??

thanks playboy.. for your reply..i do apreciate it..
but be sure that i don't copy it from some where they was belong to some one I know very close & I've took his/her promission to write it..is it ok with you now ..& beleve me that i can't steel or copied poem or anythings from others..
because i know that every one will know that....